fooling himself

This is a little fragment of feelings I had, once. Nothing more, nothing less. A simple piece came out from those times, those times of distress. Thank you for reading.

 

No amount of words can contained this feeling,

No amount of poetry can release this feeling.

I am fool who keeps fooling himself,

Keeps losing a piece of himself.

Author's Note

I guess this is another piece of me, from my book:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/captain_me/1185472/

Reviews

[Pax]

I have to quote one of my past piece:

..."A fool is only a fool if he succumbed to its nature"....

~ So i knew the feelings very well Captain. I somehow could relate to its very core, the distress of the moment. Sometimes simple words just speaks too much. It says more of the feelings than the story behind it. From time to time we became fools if we let ourself be one. MOre often I give in to that feeling, being the fool.... sigh... but as I manage to overcome it, moving on is just a step away. Then life goes on... like it always does. Very nice piece Captain. Hope your doing okay.

[captain]

Thank you, Pax. I am doing good. Its really good to comeback and recieved such warm review.

[FateDictates]

to set the record straight ..there's nothing foolish bout your words...they pack a punch and perform poetically..so ls pls vent, write and express away..I'll be reading..

[captain]

Thank you so much. You are so kind. I'll do write whenever I can and as much as possible vent all my heart out. I hope you too. I feel like poetry heals the soul.

[paul sal.....]

You have released the feeling, hey, life is one step, one minute at a time, the act of moving forward is all one needs to do to stay on board

[captain]

thank you, Salinger. :) I'll definitely do that, sometime I over worry too much.

[paul sal.....]

worrying is over rated, breath in the morning and the rest of the day is gravy..........................

[captain]

smiling, that's a great idea!

[Kasey Miriam]

These are so very touching, relatable, and well written. Powerful words Captin. These poems make me go back to how I felt a year ago.

[captain]

thank you so much again, kasey. I so appreciate this.

[Kasey Miriam]

you are truly welcome

[Renée]

losing pieces of yourself…here I see you sharing pieces of yourself….your a strong one Captain.. not easy to go beyond these feelings...

[captain]

Thank you, Renee. I am trying to be strong. I am so glad you understand my feelings so well, special friend always does that and I am so happy you are one.

[Renée]

honored to be Dear Captain ( :

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the four lines. Hard to understand when we look into the mirror and see a stranger looking back. Pieces of hope, dreams and places seem to fade away. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[captain]

You are so right, sir. I hardly recognize the man everything I look at the mirror, it happens when I am too depressed that I just want to shatter everything in my path. Yet never do I did it, maybe because I fear violence. Self Violence is really self-destructive, so I avoid it as much as possible. Thank you so much for this wonderful review sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. I have changed life completely four times. Left old memories behind. I even joined a war to escape. I tell people. Don't like your life. Move and begin fresh. It is easier than it seemed.

[Justine]

Too much truth here for comfort. "I am a fool who keeps fooling himself" - I can, unfortunately, relate. It's something we all do when everything else is just too painful. I will check out the link in your author's note. Great brevity here Captain :)

[captain]

Thank you, Justine. This review makes me feel not so alone with this feeling.

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful feeling indeed but one we must work on. We have so many negative feelingsd in life and we must find a way to control or eliminate them. Google : "13 things strong minded people avoid."..Just like that. Written by Forbes. You will be inspired...A great write...:).............

[captain]

Sami, thank you. I have read it all. It's uplifting. I did find some of my traits there that I really need to work on. It is so great that you have shared this informative review Sami, thank you again.

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...You are welcome...:)...................