fooling himself

fooling himself

A Chapter by captain
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This is a little fragment of feelings I had, once. Nothing more, nothing less. A simple piece came out from those times, those times of distress. Thank you for reading.

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No amount of words can contained this feeling,

No amount of poetry can release this feeling.

I am fool who keeps fooling himself,

Keeps losing a piece of himself.



© 2014 captain


Author's Note

captain
I guess this is another piece of me, from my book:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/captain_me/1185472/

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Pax
I have to quote one of my past piece:

..."A fool is only a fool if he succumbed to its nature"....

~ So i knew the feelings very well Captain. I somehow could relate to its very core, the distress of the moment. Sometimes simple words just speaks too much. It says more of the feelings than the story behind it. From time to time we became fools if we let ourself be one. MOre often I give in to that feeling, being the fool.... sigh... but as I manage to overcome it, moving on is just a step away. Then life goes on... like it always does. Very nice piece Captain. Hope your doing okay.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Pax. I am doing good. Its really good to comeback and recieved such warm review.



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to set the record straight ..there's nothing foolish bout your words...they pack a punch and perform poetically..so ls pls vent, write and express away..I'll be reading..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. You are so kind. I'll do write whenever I can and as much as possible vent all my.. read more
You have released the feeling, hey, life is one step, one minute at a time, the act of moving forward is all one needs to do to stay on board

Posted 6 Years Ago


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captain

6 Years Ago

thank you, Salinger. :) I'll definitely do that, sometime I over worry too much.
paul sal.....

6 Years Ago

worrying is over rated, breath in the morning and the rest of the day is gravy........................ read more
captain

6 Years Ago

smiling, that's a great idea!
These are so very touching, relatable, and well written. Powerful words Captin. These poems make me go back to how I felt a year ago.

Posted 6 Years Ago


captain

6 Years Ago

thank you so much again, kasey. I so appreciate this.
Kasey Miriam

6 Years Ago

you are truly welcome
losing pieces of yourself…here I see you sharing pieces of yourself….your a strong one Captain.. not easy to go beyond these feelings...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Renee. I am trying to be strong. I am so glad you understand my feelings so well, special.. read more
Renée

6 Years Ago

honored to be Dear Captain ( :
You said a lot in the four lines. Hard to understand when we look into the mirror and see a stranger looking back. Pieces of hope, dreams and places seem to fade away. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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captain

6 Years Ago

You are so right, sir. I hardly recognize the man everything I look at the mirror, it happens when I.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I don't know. I have changed life completely four times. Left old memories behind. I even joined a w.. read more
Too much truth here for comfort. "I am a fool who keeps fooling himself" - I can, unfortunately, relate. It's something we all do when everything else is just too painful. I will check out the link in your author's note. Great brevity here Captain :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Justine. This review makes me feel not so alone with this feeling.
A powerful feeling indeed but one we must work on. We have so many negative feelingsd in life and we must find a way to control or eliminate them. Google : "13 things strong minded people avoid."..Just like that. Written by Forbes. You will be inspired...A great write...:).............

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captain

6 Years Ago

Sami, thank you. I have read it all. It's uplifting. I did find some of my traits there that I reall.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

MY pleasure...You are welcome...:)...................
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Pax
I have to quote one of my past piece:

..."A fool is only a fool if he succumbed to its nature"....

~ So i knew the feelings very well Captain. I somehow could relate to its very core, the distress of the moment. Sometimes simple words just speaks too much. It says more of the feelings than the story behind it. From time to time we became fools if we let ourself be one. MOre often I give in to that feeling, being the fool.... sigh... but as I manage to overcome it, moving on is just a step away. Then life goes on... like it always does. Very nice piece Captain. Hope your doing okay.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Pax. I am doing good. Its really good to comeback and recieved such warm review.

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