Brian (february 21, 2009)

Brian (february 21, 2009)

A Poem by Sunny

It was a musing to a boy I liked

Hold my hand
One day you'll understand 
That I don't mean to be blunt
Or act like a stupid little b***h
It's just when I look you in the eye
I melt inside 
And get all silly in the head
Thats around the time
When they take you away
I want to beg you to stay
But its not like your mine
i just have to try not to cry
Even though it makes me so blue
My heart yearns to tell you
My head finds a need to expel you
From all thoughts that my cause my heart to grow fonder 
Now I ponder:
Could there be a way 
That, maybe, just maybe
You feel the same
That the silences we share
Are because we both want to cherish what little time we have
Before someone nabs you away
Or causes me to stray
That both our hearts quicken in time
Just before we see each other 
That the slumbering butterflies
That never seem to wake
Can make both of our bodies shake
When ever we near each other
Could it be my darling
That I love you and you love me
And that in our own twisted little world
We're meant to be?

© 2010 Sunny

Author's Note

I know its really rhymie lol

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"My heart yearns to tell you
My head finds a need to expel you"

I love those two lines. Very well written

Posted 12 Years Ago

Comes together well, especially the rhyme in this piece
Great job well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

The beginning was a bit weak, but holy cow... towards the middle you just held on and kept on growing strong. Excellent job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Oh it's sooo cute lol. i love it. great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on June 8, 2010
Last Updated on June 10, 2010
Tags: Love, crush, desire



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A Poem by Sunny