A Poem by Carlouse

A poem to those moments...

      Take a breathe.exhale. Don't impale the simple rhythmic status of my mind... Even after her words contradict our love, i find the spark of slight sanity to keep your heart unioned with mine... You find it in you to push me away... 23 days and on that 23rd night the fight for your life began. Hour by hour my heart raced.not finding a mellow pace... You found it in me to live another day... And with the days, weeks and even months that passed you grew that blue spark in your eyes... Your lips formed the key to my heart...not knowing what to say wrapping my arms around you... Like no tomorrow could come of this...how many days,steps,minutes,even seconds did we spend side by side...now i shuffle to catch the scattered remains of what used to be said carried by the breathe of her voice...

© 2010 Carlouse

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beautiful, very nice rhythm!

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Omaha Nebraska, United States Minor Outlying Islands

I write to live and live to write...and i like b***s...alot...but yeah get to knnow me ;) more..

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