Her  Kindness

Her Kindness

A Poem by Carlouse
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not sure

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A heart alone…
lies next to his very enemy…
not quiet believing but a lot more deceiving…
he lies in a box…
not an inch to spare…
the moon fore scorn across his face…
the light holds her kindness…
her love so great…
even with a cluttered room…
he still seeks sorrow…
for the day his eyes retrieve…
the glorious day he can counter mingle with those of a deceiving heritage…
with little understanding…
of happiness…
his hope is but a flicker of light …

© 2010 Carlouse


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Carlouse
uhm holocaust project

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haha thank yu.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think this was a good poem. I think this will work well for your project. It was good. I do feel it is a little unfinished, but I'm sure that you will work it out.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Carlouse
Carlouse

Omaha Nebraska, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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