Romeo and Juliet

Romeo - A rosen bush
its all I need
need to make love
love to a prinsses above

 

 

Juliet - A man that loves me
me and no one eles
climbe up to my window
asking to be his
I probebly say yes
and then live a life with him, I guess

 

Romeo- Juliet please come
come to your window and sing a song
a song about
love,
trust,
doubt

 

Juliet - I sing
but please come and give me a ring
a ring from your heart to mine
and live with me in all time

 

 Romeo - Yes I will
but just sing, and I give you my ring

Reviews

[i.am.the.sun.]

i really like this, although i really dislike the flat out story of romeo and juliet, i love poems and songs written about it. this is great! i love how it's like a dialog and you cant help but read it in different voices. the candor of it is just great :) excellent job!

[cilla]

I've come back to this several times and each time I find something new I like. Romeo and Juliet is an often told story about what love truly means. So, you've taken on a big challenge and created something uniquely your own. The repeated words ... at the end of one line then starting the next was an ingenious delight.

Well done!

[M. D. Soleil]

I like it! the rythm gets interrupted a bit but it still flows. I like the way you did this like dialogue.

[Akina]

this is so amazingly written K-roo. the flow and the romance, it's wonderful =D
I dont know what I could say, beautiful job.

Akina