I know you

Love me,

come on girl comfort me

Place all your trust in me 

love touch and honouring

This promise i'm offering

I'll offer again

 

I will fight them off,

and ill fight till the end

 

I'd die to protect you

I'd fight to defend you

You're my friend,

Deep in my prayers

 

Not amused

I kill the doubt they try creating

all that they tell me is I'm mistaken

That all the love you give, you're just faking

They say that I'm in a state

 

 

Those poeple are hateful

Untruthful, ungrateful

I will be faithful

 

We'll will fight them off,

and we''ll fight till the end.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

a poem that impresses with honesty and reality...

[Matt]

Thank you kind sir

[TheBatman]

This is real good man

[Matt]

I'm sure I know you!

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is intense, that you would love and promise to protect someone who lies to you. A beautiful write.

[Matt]

ohh I better fix that up. Its meant to suggest that they tell me shes full of lies

[Matt]

Thank you for your review. Appreciated!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Ahh ok well the lines that says 'your lies they surround me" suggests that she is telling lies. Still a great write either way.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Matt]

fixed :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Cool I like what you've done it speaks of a love that is unbiased and won't be swayed. Lovely.

[Matt]

Thank you very much. I also fixed it up again. I see your point better now...lol. Thank you for pointing it out too.

[Matt]

It doesn't read right. But i'll leave it for now I think

[Carolann Dowsett]

I like it :)