Mirror Mirror

Mirror Mirror

A Poem by caseymichelle31
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It's simple but I think it's effective.

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Mirror Mirror
Who is this girl I see?

Mirror Mirror
I don't like what's staring back at me

Mirror Mirror
Is this just my Destiny?

Mirror Mirror
Is this all I can possibly be?

Mirror Mirror
I don't feel in control or free

Mirror Mirror
Crack and shatter before me

Mirror Mirror
Help, I've lost all sense of my identity.

© 2014 caseymichelle31


Author's Note

caseymichelle31
Please let me know what you think, even if you think it's rubbish :)

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repitition ,rhyme .Its like a sad spell.It sounds pretty and I feel it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is not rubbish at all! I really liked the concept behind the piece and a lot of people can relate to this. Well done!

~Stefanie

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rubbish? Not at all! I'd say this articulates quite nicely the thoughts you have of yourself and the feeling of not being yourself. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

caseymichelle31

7 Years Ago

Aw, thank you very much :)

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Added on August 3, 2014
Last Updated on August 3, 2014
Tags: mirror, identity, girl, staring, destiny, dark, control, free, crack, shatter, lost, sense, help, pain, poem, poetry, sad, hope

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caseymichelle31
caseymichelle31

Sligo, Gurteen, Ireland



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Hi my name's Michelle. I'm definitely not a professional writer, or in fact anything close! Sure, I'm only 16. I sometimes write to express how I feel at a certain time and it helps so please be nice .. more..

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