In the Dark

Even in the

Darkest hour

I’ll never

Lose sight

Of love.

 

Because

Love’s dusk

Shines brighter

Then the

Sunrise of

Mere lust,

The gold of

love's sun

is anything but

The rust that

Grows on

Static hearts.

 

And if I

Didn’t believe

In love

Then I’d lose

What I have

Come to know

As what is

A part of

My soul.

 

So give me

Midnight, turn

Off the lights

And I’ll watch

The world

Be lit by

The candlelight

Of love’s stars

As their light

Glides and guides

Me through

The night,

Waiting with me

For the

Smiling sunrise.

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

nice work, this sure was great! i like how those lines just have one, two or three words, now to me that sure adds impact to each and every word. the message of this one was really sweet and powerful as well. wonderful work here!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the begining of this totally struck me, almost brought me to tears. i think everyone should have this attitude amidst dark times. wonderfully written!

[*skittlez*]

really nice love it you keep up the good wring

[Jonathan]

1,12,12... 9... 3,1,14... 7,9,22,5... 20,15... 21... 9,19...

1... 19,13,9,12,5... 20,15... 12,5,20... 21... 11,14,15,23...

21... 18... 2,5,1,21,20,9,6,21,12...

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Really nice, wonderful images, keep it up!~

[SilentDreamer]

Very well written. I like how you used the sun to show love. Nice job.:)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was beautiful, the flow is great- and wording also. I felt the emotions linger on and off.

[Moflo]

I love your pacing i this poem, its simple and choppy but so intense and flickering. Really conveys the emotion nicely. Nice work.

[Ruth]

The infused elements here are wonderful, when I read this at AB, I was astounded by its depth love!
xx

[iamcarolfierce]

Bravo! This is really very creative, wonderful, stupendous. I wish I could be creative as you are.You really put your heart in your writings.