Wind Farms and Sunsets

(wind farms get bad press, but I love them)

A setting sun creates a splash,

on Roan beach the turbines turn.

Each blade salutes a crimson sky,

we stand and watch the evening burn

as threads of gold are interspersed

with bloodied cloud, deep clotted red

and stretched across the blackened sand

are pools which show salt water's bled.

Let time stand still, take in this scene,

too soon this gift that's given us

will fade and leave us in the shade,

in silence gone with little fuss.

Reviews

[lightsong]

You took there my friend, such way You have with words, I admire Your talent with description, because it's simple and beautiful the same time, reaching to our hearts with a gentle sense, Your last verse with the shade of warm wistfulness added a magical touch.

Thank You dear Chris for sharing agsin Your bliss with us.

[Chris Shaw]

I wish more could see what I see. Poets do, but others let it all slip by without a thought. Thank you Light. Pleased to share this with someone who would appreciate it.

Chris

[lightsong]

I understand what You say my friend, many take the wonderment of nature for granted, I'm not good as You with describing the scenes I might see, but I surely appreciate it, and appreciate someone like You, who can share it beautifully with us :)

[Chris Shaw]

You are so kind. Thank you :))

[lightsong]

same as You my lovely friend :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

A gorgeous portrayal, Chris.

"...with bloodied cloud, deep clotted red..."
Stunning line!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jimmy. Was a treat to see.

Chris

[barleygirl]

I love it when an imaginative writer like you comes up with collections that are so unusual yet interesting and also the words sound so good going along together. There isn't one line here that describes this scene in any of usual or expected ways. That's what I love most about good writing (((HUGS))) Fondly Margie

[Chris Shaw]

So pleased you enjoyed the read Margie. Thank you.

Fondest

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Just beautiful is the sight of the setting sun when day gives way to night- sometimes when I watch the sky changing colours i wish i could just take a brush and paint a picture to capture such beauty that only lasts for a split section of time- no two sunsets will ever be the same so unique and rare only the hand of God could ordain such breathtaking beauty- wonderfullly written🌹

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your lovely review Thoughts In Time. Your words are truly appreciated.

Chris

[Abby]

This is a very interesting poem. The amount of description you've used makes up for a truly beautiful poem. Well done! :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Abby for your review. Pleased to meet you.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are amazing with the way you don't just paint scenes but you bring us into the picture...we are enclosed within the frame.

you are so good...i bow to your talent, Chris.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You are a true poet Jacob, and those words from you mean a great deal. I work very hard on imagery, so it's good to know it pays off. Thank you so much.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words dear Chris. Your words create visions and thoughts for the reader. What our eyes can see. Make us come alive or sad. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Coyote for your lovely response.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Chris. I enjoyed the poem.

[Lorry]

I do love wind farms and the whum whum whump, along with the sight of these giants, reminding us that we should be renewing what we take, not plundering. They do look beautiful against a gold sunset, swaying us to their rhythm.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lorry. Renewables, it's all about that. So important these days. I love those turning blades at varying speeds. They always look so elegant to me.

Chris

[Lorry]

They look great at sunset against a gold sky. I know some people dislike them, but they will always look elegant to me.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, there's many who think them an eye sore, but I could stand and watch them for hours!

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I feel as though I can see it all right in front of me! Love this. The flow is beautiful as well. I love that you chose a subject that not a lot of people focus on, that really adds to how unique this piece is.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your response, your review is very much appreciated and I am pleased that you visited my page.

Chris

[Dave]

You put forth such a beautiful picture. Your words are likened to a painting by an artist that knows exactly the colors he needs to add to complete the scene he or she wants to bring forth. Thank you for your writing, I enjoyed it very much.

Take care - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

I'm very happy that you enjoyed this poem Dave. Thank you for your kind response. Best wishes

Chris