Footprints Left in Sand or Snow

Footprints Left in Sand or Snow

A Poem by Chris Shaw

Far deeper set than those in sand
which mark a path across a bay,
our dearest will not wash away.

As imprints left in dampened grains
soon fade when fickle tide returns
or when the wind sweeps them astray.

On borrowed time, they can not last.
Compare them to the winter snow
which melts when warmth demands it so.

Yet footprints cast within our hearts
cemented smooth with love and pain,
they are the ones that will remain.

You'll see them in another's smile
or in the tears they gently weep.
Who says we go without a trace,
we stay for those whose love runs deep.

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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So true Chirs... those prints on the heart.... as we keep moving on....they remain ...and reminds us of the tales of smiles and tears....and reminds us to keep making beautiful memories as life is short....to count the smiles ... loved your sweet poem...

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Dear Ardra thank you for your kind words and your visit. All good wishes

Chris



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This is so true and beautifully expressed. Loved ones lost are never forgotten. They appear in silent moments, tv shows, conversations with friends... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

They stay in spirit with us long after they have gone. Thank you Carolynn.

Chris
Beautifully written, Chris.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Pleased you enjoyed my lines.

Chris
This is deeply haunting...carried across big water to my soul! Blessed be Christine...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

If my words travel, then I am happy. If they touched your soul, happier still Queenie.

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Aside from the beautifully worded message of hope contained in this lovely and uplifting poem, the eight syllable count in each line is absolutely perfect and makes the whole poem flow so easily, especially, as I did, when it is read aloud.

Really, really liked this.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you Beccy, especially for reading this poem out loud. I read all my stuff out loud myself befo.. read more
Beautifully written piece. I loved the flow of it, and it's message of hope. Time moves on, some of us don't ... Thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit Brandon. Your thoughts appreciated and welcome.

Chris
Wonderful use of words dear Chris. I agree with the ending. A beautiful poem written my friend.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

You always give such lovely uplifting reviews Coyote. Always a pleasure seeing you call on my page.<.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to read your work and you are welcome Chris.
an agreeable subject with a delightful rhyme & rhythm. nicely worded!


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Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Your visit and kind review are appreciated Carola. Thank you and pleased to meet you on my page. All.. read more
Ah, dear Chris this reminds me of "those who are mine just stay only mine"....You captured 'footprints' of love and pain so beautifully..:)
Thankyou lady for this one!!☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

When it is lovely to see you in my page. Thank you so much for your words and visit. All good wishes.. read more
So true Chirs... those prints on the heart.... as we keep moving on....they remain ...and reminds us of the tales of smiles and tears....and reminds us to keep making beautiful memories as life is short....to count the smiles ... loved your sweet poem...

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Dear Ardra thank you for your kind words and your visit. All good wishes

Chris

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Added on September 22, 2018
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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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