Learning The Hard Way

Learning The Hard Way

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(Tears from a five year old)

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A mallard coasted into sight,
a newly hatched in close pursuit.
"How cute", said Beth, as light grew dim,
"They've planned to have an evening swim".
We viewed amused, as they both cruised
on rippled water happily.
The day was done, the last of sun,
no sign of pending gravity.
A sudden splash, quick as a flash,
our tiny duckling dragged below.
A lurking pike, to our dislike
had dealt an unexpected blow.
I can not speak of Beth's dismay
that food chains have to end this way.

© 2018 Chris Shaw


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Haha! I remember those 5 year old days! Like when I first learned that chicken nuggest were actually from chickens... That DEVASTATED me! We raise chickens and I'd always play with the chicks. my dad is the teaser who would walk in on me playing with them and would go "hmm. I think I'll make chicken nuggets tonight" and he'd pick up a chick and walk away. I used to cry and cry until he finally told me he was joking.

This was a fun poem. Morbidly funny :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you Sarah. I had to smile about your chicken nuggets story. Yes, it can be quite an eye opener.. read more
LazerRays

5 Years Ago

No problem ;P anytime
Yes how sad to have to watch that but it is the cycle of life- born to die sometimes for some sooner than later- life is short it needs to be enjoyed- live laugh love swim enjoy as today it could all end🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Yes, life is about lessons and we can't interfere with nature. Thank you lovely lady.

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Years Ago

The pleasure is mine kind lady and I do hope your heart is happy🌹
What a sad poem, but it is what it is. We can't defy the natural order.
All in all it is a wonderful piece!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you Flowers of Eternity. We have no control over nature.

Chris
When the reader felt the dismay, the poem came to life. We cannot fight nature but accept with grace its beauty and cruelty. Expertly written and narrated.

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dhara.

Chris
I remember watching the Planet Earth series just a couple of years ago and wondering how my kids would react. More so my daughter who is youngest and sensitive. She looked at my son shocked at one point (her big brother) who responded with "hey, that's life". and that was the end of it. This was a cute poem. I enjoyed it. I can totally relate to those moments.

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you Ana for sharing your experience. Very much appreciated.

Chris
This is the reason why I stopped watching animal kingdom videos. Usually tiny creatures fall prey to predators and it is stressful to grasp it all under the pretext of food chain theory. Harsh realities of Nature are very hard to comprehend! You beautifully illustrated lessons of life Chris.

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

It's hard to watch M isn't it? We all know it happens but that doesn't make it any easier does it. N.. read more
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Gee
Blimey, poor old duckling. Guess we're lucky we are at the top of the food chain.
As usual Christine perfect rhyme and flow.
Hope you are well

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you Gee. Yep, was quite a shock to see in this lovely tranquil setting.

Chris
Took me back to my childhood Chris, I lived close to Th Kennet and Avon canal and most of our entertainment took place there, and education. Pike were our seasonal fishing subjects and they did catch and destroy many of lovely mother nature's beautiful objects. I love your connection with Nature in your poems, you do it so well. thankyou once again. Take care Rod.

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Dear Rod, good to see you. Your visits so welcome. Take good care of yourself.

Chris
Sensitivity in a child is inherent makes them our angels and praying that they stay this way forever

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

What a lovely comment to leave settee. Thank you so much.

Chris
Hello, Chris! :)
That's quite a shock, haha, and the cadence is lovely.

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you mattavelli. Your thoughts very welcome.

Chris

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