Slipping

Slipping

A Poem by Chris Shaw

i dig deeper

pictures of you
archived in my mind
blur on recall

i find twenty eight years
have taken a toll
your image not as defined
nor clear as it once was

colours fade into greys
i long for the return of minutia
to turn back the clock
i want to take the lid off
death's parting shot

i want to see breath in you
the rise and fall of your chest
see those microscopic beads
of perspiration clinging
to your forehead's flesh

blue laughter in your eyes
that wide streak of silver white
that complements
your short back and sides

this early morning
I will tarry for a while
I will wade through the mists
to recapture the you I knew
in high definition




© 2019 Chris Shaw


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It only slips; never disappears completely; if it did, we would become a different species entirely.
'
I want to see breath in you
the rise and fall of your chest
see those microscopic beads
of perspiration clinging
to your forehead's flesh.'

A transfixing verse in a truly moving poem.

Beccy.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thank yous Beccy for your thoughtful review. So appreciate your calling in.

Chri.. read more


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Nice poem... This goes to someone very special, maybe the person is not there anymore but your heart still cares

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Crosby for your thoughtful review.

Chris
Crosby  Idasa

4 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend
Time certainly blurs mental images; departed loved ones eventually become more
sad emotions or collections of heartwarming stories than clearly recalled pictorials.
It is, indeed, tragic how Death so grimly reaps our beloved dead.
Work that wrenches the heart, poetess!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thanks Jimmy for your thoughts here. Appreciating your many visits.

Chris
omg..i know exactly how you feel...that haunting image you just can't get a grasp on...lingering in the back of your thoughts... so close and yet so far...
i spent my whole life in foster care until i was 8 years old and got adopted by a wonderful family who loves me. the faces i can no longer remember are my brother jeremy who helped care for me when we were together in our first foster home and the face of the mother who gave birth to me...

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kathy rivers

4 Years Ago

no problem..your poem really spoke to me and i wanted you to know.
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Then I thank you again :)
kathy rivers

4 Years Ago

your quite welcome.
There were several people in my life I could relate this to. Death sucks.

A moving poem, Chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Tim. I appreciate your visit and your thoughts. All good wishes.

Chris
A sad poem from you Chris as you reflect on someone loved. A parent I guess. It happens to us all as time passes and photographs I find are a god send. Even so a good poem filled with compassionate emotion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you John. Yes thank goodness for photographs. This poem was about my Dad. Appreciate your visi.. read more
Thanks to Samuel I have discovered this one. I must have missed it the first time. Glad I caught it though. It is more difficult as the years go by to see the face clearly. Thankfully we have old photos...almost always black and white...but at least not blurry.
I have a favourite of my Dad in his uniform just after returning home from the war. In it he is young and smiling, happy to be home. He passed 55 yrs ago this Halloween and every now and then I can hear his voice or one of his corny jokes.

Thank you for taking me back, Chris, ...it was a good day for it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

So pleased Ted for your visit and that today was a good day for it. That's a lot of years that have .. read more
This made me think of my parents--Mother, 46 years gone, Father, 20. A sister and brother, also. I can still hear their voices and see their smiles. This sensitive and well-worded poem tells me the many ways our loved ones may be missed.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Samuel for your review. I hear them and see smiles too, but have to dig deeper into my mem.. read more
It seems all things fall by the way with time. I hate it. It's so painful at times I just have to laugh at the futility of it all. Almost all of my male mentors have passed, and the memories of them are fading. When a recollection of them comes, nowadays, I hold tight, but it bleeds out of me from the onslaught of responsibility. This is truly a wonderful, heartfelt poem that has me thinking. I thank you for that. Have a good day, Christine. CD

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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thanks CD. Your visit is much appreciated, as is your understanding of these lines. All good wi.. read more
Day by day memory seems to be fading,
Like it's loosing its contents, though seems intact.
Mind escape things,
Past evades thought,
Feeling dies little by little,
When fueler is out of focus.
But sometimes it's impressive,
To bring back a memory from the far past behind.

Well written, Chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Kay for considering my lines. Much appreciated. All good wishes.

Chris
It is so strange...the tricks our memories play on us. When I try to recall loved ones who have passed, I see them in my mind's eye in a state of perfection, not in a state of pain or suffering. Wonderful piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Rubie. I often do as well if they have died recently, but with this piece, after 28 years .. read more

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Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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