Through The Skylight

Through The Skylight

A Poem by Chris Shaw
"

a morning gift

"
autumn gold wakes me
decants into thirsty skin
not a drop wasted

© 2019 Chris Shaw


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well done ... really appreciate the call of your closing line ... take the time .. never waste a drop .. our "special" days that exude our seasons are precious indeed ... to be rolled in ... reveled in .. breathed deeply in ... the haiku form is perfect for the theme ... you create an intimate and emotive scene that has power and imagination ... again .. nice one says i!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mr E for your lovely thoughts. Always appreciated, as I too appreciated the sun's blessin.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

:) ......................



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You paint such a lovely scene of autumn in such a few words. A beautiful walk through golden poetry!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review. Your visit most welcome.

Chris
Autumn is such a wonderful season of the year.
All you see it leafs falling and the beautiful colors they leave.
The way you have portrayed it with such splendid words it makes you enjoy it even more.
The gold of autumn makes you go back in time.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Chris
well done ... really appreciate the call of your closing line ... take the time .. never waste a drop .. our "special" days that exude our seasons are precious indeed ... to be rolled in ... reveled in .. breathed deeply in ... the haiku form is perfect for the theme ... you create an intimate and emotive scene that has power and imagination ... again .. nice one says i!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mr E for your lovely thoughts. Always appreciated, as I too appreciated the sun's blessin.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

:) ......................
Beautifully crafted. A morning is surely a gift as it brings both a new day and new opportunities to try once again and rectify the mistakes we had done in our past. Really liked the use of "decant"

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Angeline for your encouraging review. This morning's early sunlight was indeed a welcome g.. read more
Anjeline

4 Years Ago

My pleasure dear Chris :)

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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