Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by Christine Anne Shaw
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River Musings

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lily lays her head
safely in embrace of leaves
floating on water

© 2020 Christine Anne Shaw


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The water lily, one of my favs, beautiful haiku, lovely visuals

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Thank you Corset, it truly is a sight to behold. All good wishes.

Chris


................. an observation, so well captured & now perfectly framed.. almost to die for :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Thank you Neville. One of the small joys of the river. In clusters and so perfectly lovely.
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You know, of course, your profound creativity has given meaning and beauty to a rather mundane event.
Happy to have witnessed this sublime filtration!

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

What a lovely and welcome review. Thank you so much.

Chris
Gentle, beautiful and wonderful words shared. Hello dear Chris and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Thank you Coyote. Just a little observation by the river. How nature can inspire us.

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Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Chris.
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bee
Such a soothing image and a piece of heaven indeed.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Dear bee, thank you for your thoughtful review.

Chris
Is this heaven? Do we all have our own personal heavens? Your poem raises interesting points.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Thank you adornoscousin. If I had been a lily, I would have been in a state of bliss. We all have ou.. read more
Such simple words, yet so profoundly beautiful images flow through it ;-]

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much Weeping willow. Pleased you enjoyed.

Chris
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I will be maybe also describe colours at this poem. But maybe this can give a freedom to everyone to put own colors . Very intimate poem in embrace of connection in between each layer of one self.

Posted 7 Months Ago


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7 Months Ago

If I can say what I like about London. It will be probably endless evening walks around the water ch.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

That sounds like Maida Vale to me. Not far from Paddington Station. I like the river Thames and the .. read more
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7 Months Ago

Actually i don't remember how this part of London call. I know it was quiet on the edge of the town... read more
Great capture.
A lovely bit of creative staging.
Wonderful!

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Many thanks Jimmy. Couldn't help myself here. All I saw was a lover's blissful embrace.

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I loved this haiku. Gave me such a sense of serenity!

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Lovely to see you Ditzy. Thank you so much.

Chris
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Welcome my friend. :)

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Christine Anne Shaw
Christine Anne Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Have been at Writerscafe for two years now, content to be in the company of like minded souls who love poetry. There are many talented poets on this forum. Have been reading poetry most of my life,.. more..

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