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A Poem by Christine Anne Shaw
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gift me a blade of grass
though not before dawn
has cast her crystal tears
upon its green

gift me a blade of grass
so every droplet glistens
dew bead bright, rainbow lights
kissed gently by the first
touch of morning sun

gift me a blade of grass
and I will have all that my 
heart desires before the 
day is done





 

© 2020 Christine Anne Shaw


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Cleanse/ cleansed?
Well, it's better than my second thought for a title "Does this smell of dog piss to you?" 😀
A beautiful glimpse into a beautiful mind... that I have just soiled. My head is hung in shame. But you know me Chris, once I thunk it, I have to talk it 😀
Think happy thoughts Chris, throwing shoes never solved anyth OUCH! 😀

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Good job I know you Lorry. Dog piss indeed:)) Sort of takes the beauty away and leaves me with my no.. read more



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This poem is really touching to me. Being a grateful for such a small thing as a blade of grass makes me appreciate what a big deal it can really be.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Dylan for your thoughtful review. Your visit appreciated.

Chris
Cleanse/ cleansed?
Well, it's better than my second thought for a title "Does this smell of dog piss to you?" 😀
A beautiful glimpse into a beautiful mind... that I have just soiled. My head is hung in shame. But you know me Chris, once I thunk it, I have to talk it 😀
Think happy thoughts Chris, throwing shoes never solved anyth OUCH! 😀

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Good job I know you Lorry. Dog piss indeed:)) Sort of takes the beauty away and leaves me with my no.. read more
I don't need much...just a beautiful morning.
My suggestion for a title would be "The Morning's Due"

love the imagery in this one, Chris.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Jacob. Material things are of no consequence. The diamond fell out of my engagement ring. .. read more
You are, unquestionably, a romantic whom Nature continually inspires.
Simply, sublime, gifted poetess!



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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

You give so much encouragement Jimmy and I need that at times to pick my pen up. Thank you.
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I just got back from a rustic camp site (no plumbing or showers!). This poem reminds me of that. Great poem!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

I hope you had a great trip. That was surely rustic. I've been camping but not without showers or to.. read more
This is such a lovely piece, Ms. Chris. I whiffed in glee the natural essence of the scenic elements you painted in this write. May you come up with a genuine title :) Regards.

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your lovely review. I really appreciate your visit and kind thoughts.

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Dew visits or dew vistas or dew kisses

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Many thank you Kent for your visit and your suggestions for a title. I appreciate your input. All go.. read more
Lovely ah the blades of grass, lyrical.

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Moon. The Blades of Grass might be one I consider. Thanking you for your visit.
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How beautiful! Nature is such a soothing presence, as asked, I can see a title such as "Dewly" for this piece, just my thoughts :) Stunning write Chris :)

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you dear Ruth for your encouraging review and your title suggestion. I appreciate you and your.. read more
this is a very very beautiful poem
it makes me think of a spring romance
i can see how you might struggle with a title, i am struggling too

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Ana. Not sure yet for a title. That doesn't happen to me often. The muse wouldn't help.read more

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Christine Anne Shaw
Christine Anne Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Have been at Writerscafe for two years now, content to be in the company of like minded souls who love poetry. There are many talented poets on this forum. Have been reading poetry most of my life,.. more..

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