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Suggestions for a title please

gift me a blade of grass

though not before dawn

has cast her crystal tears

upon its green

gift me a blade of grass

so every droplet glistens

dew bead bright, rainbow lights

kissed gently by the first

touch of morning sun

gift me a blade of grass

and I will have all that my 

heart desires before the 

day is done

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Cleanse/ cleansed?
Well, it's better than my second thought for a title "Does this smell of dog piss to you?" 😀
A beautiful glimpse into a beautiful mind... that I have just soiled. My head is hung in shame. But you know me Chris, once I thunk it, I have to talk it 😀
Think happy thoughts Chris, throwing shoes never solved anyth OUCH! 😀

[Chris Shaw]

Good job I know you Lorry. Dog piss indeed:)) Sort of takes the beauty away and leaves me with my nose screwed up. You can lift your head up now. You are forgiven. Have a great weekend.

Chris

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How about heartfelt blades of evening grass. I know it's too long but this is best how is gets.

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased you commented on this one Martin. I thought you would like it as I know you love nature. Title needs to be short. I am still pondering but thank you for your visit.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

quite lovely..................

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you kind sir. Does a little curtsey.

Chris