Remember Them

Remember Them

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(an old poem posted on another site and reworked)

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scorched black and torched this bloodied, grieving soil
where mangled corpses sprawl in no man's land
felled by the rapid fire from gunner's blitz

brave men advancing blindly to their foe
go onwards past their brothers left in death
who sacrificed their lives who gave their all

all hell on earth as terror grips their minds
this carnage we recall brings home its stain
seared in our hearts such slaughter weeps in pain

so many years ago lest we forget
red bleeds our wounded sky in deep respect
while sinking sun hangs heavy with our shame

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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From a veteran I say thank you. My entire family including my mom served in different branches. It's incredibly nerve wracking to have to read the news to find out if your brother is still alive after weeks of hearing zero. You did an amazing job of capturing the emotional sacrifice of our forgotten heroes Chris.

Semper Fi

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you duff. So pleased that sacrifice came through to you in my poem. It bothers me that some do.. read more



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This is a terrific write full of drama in such a short write. I know I went far back in your list of poems but this one pulled me in just by the title alone. I’m glad I stopped by for this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for seeking this one out. An old poem recently found. Appreciate you reading it Pa.. read more
If only war could be apprehended and locked inside a box. I dream of a world void of hatred and greed. A dream, it certainly is. Tis a fine poem, Christine, full of reverence for those who gave their all.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Many thanks Sam for leaving this lovely review. All good wishes.

Chris
This an homage to veterans who have served in many wars. Your descriptions are vivid and very true. So many tears have been shed over bloodies dead corpses; so much pain has reared its head because of this. It is our duty to remember these brave souls and to honor those who gave their lives. Well written and memorable. Fondly, Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Betty for your thoughtful response. Take care.

Chris
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

You’re welcome!
very strong emotional piece. a sad commentary on war but a wonderful tribute to those who fought and gave the ultimate sacrifice. someone once said that there should be a rule of war that you can't kill someone until you get to know them first. well said and well penned chris ... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Pete for your encouraging review. Always good to see you on my page. Take care.
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A lovely poem, Christine, and just in time for Remembrance day, i presume? I saw your Queen placing a wreath just recently, so I assume that is the occasion. The Great War was a terrible war and the carnage and sacrifice was truly horrific. We must always remember those who gave up their lives for freedom from evil. With poetry like this, they are never forgotten. 💛

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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Yes Marina, written for remembrance day a few years ago and given an airing. Thank you so much for r.. read more
From a veteran I say thank you. My entire family including my mom served in different branches. It's incredibly nerve wracking to have to read the news to find out if your brother is still alive after weeks of hearing zero. You did an amazing job of capturing the emotional sacrifice of our forgotten heroes Chris.

Semper Fi

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you duff. So pleased that sacrifice came through to you in my poem. It bothers me that some do.. read more
Thankyou for this

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

I always respect the importance of remembrance Sunday. I thank you Dave for your visit to my page.read more
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War is nothing but devastation personified. Loss of life only at the cost of ego of supremacy. War is shameful, derogatory. But the lives that lost on the battle field... Should not be forgotten. The respect we can show to them by not forgetting their sacrifices

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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear Sima. I appreciate your visit and thoughts.

Chris
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Death would have been blessed relief from life in the trenches waiting to die. You say it as it was Christine, futile, inhuman.
On a lighter note, hope you are well. I take it you are bikini clad enjoying this lovely autumn day :))

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Gee. Alas my bikini days are over but it was nice to briefly reflect on them :) I apprecia.. read more

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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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