Lasting

for friendship is a cherished gift

it lifts, enriches, outlives time

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when death destroyed your beating heart

it cast a shadow over mine

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this morning as i sipped on tea

i swear i saw you wave at me

Reviews

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So touching piece this one, I just loved it. Friendship is a precious gift to treasure and cherish. Once a bond is created it remains with us forever. And no word can describe the void that lingers in our hearts when we lose that friend. I am quite touched by this.

[Chris Shaw]

A very special friend Sima who sadly died at 46 leaving behind three young children. She lived opposite us for many years. Your review is very thoughtful. Thank you.

Chris

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So sad to hear this. Though her physical presence is absent but i know the eternal bond between you two will remain alive forever, you are such a lovely person. Love

[Einstein Noodle]

oh wow! precious write says i! into me ol' library this one goes ... you packed it with fine poetic ryhming couplets .. packed it with story and emotion ... really fine poetry ma'am!
E.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Mr E, couldn't ask for a more encouraging review. So pleased you like this one. Delighted it will go in your library :)) Sending you all good wishes.

Chris

[red93]

Nicely written Chris and again this is where short form Poetry scores everytime, leaving the reader to 'fill in the gaps'. Excellent use of half-rhyme as well.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you red93 for your encouragement. Means a great deal.

Chris

[Just Kim]

What an amazing write, right here. This is wonderful

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Kim. I appreciate your visit. Good to see you. Take care.

[Stella Armour]

Lovely thoughts Chris, i am sure when we pass we do leave a part of our essence with those we were close to ....

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks dear Stella for checking in. Much appreciated. Happy Saturday.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

My pleasure ..... :)

[Dave]

This is so beautiful. Friends are so hard to come by. I love the following definition of a friend:
A friend is someone who knows all there is to know about you and likes you anyway.

Take care -- Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave and your definition of a friend is heart warming. Hope you are keeping well. Take good care of yourself and many thanks for stopping by.

Chris

[Dave]

I am well and getting ready to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I hope and pray that you and yours are well too.

[Chris Shaw]

We are going into a tier 4 lockdown tomorrow. Not allowed to mix with anyone outside our household. It will be a quiet Christmas. Hopefully the vaccine will be coming our way soon. Happy Birthday for tomorrow. Have a wonderful day and keep safe Dave.

Chris

[Diana]

"when death destroyed your beating heart
it cast a shadow over mine"- Such a thief, death. Such a thief, life too, at times. Really enjoyed this short piece...but with impact.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Diana, I appreciate your visit. All good wishes.

Chris

[Relic]

There are certain imprints on the mind that never go away.
A trusted friend is hard to lose. A part of you has died too.

[Chris Shaw]

Well said Tim. You are absolutely right. Thank you for your visit.

Chris

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Powerful write. I could feel the emotion choking up my mind's eye as I read the end. Wonderfully penned!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Cyprian. Your visit most appreciated.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Chris. Love and friendship outlive death.
"this morning as i sipped on tea
i swear i saw you wave at me"
Sometimes in my dreams. I talk to miss people. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and your amazing thoughts.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous Coyote for that lovely review. Take care of yourself.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Merry Christmas dear Chris and you are welcome.

[Audie G. Couch]

This is fabulous. Almost drew tears to eyes. This poem illustrates what it means to have a friend, and the lose one feels when that person dies.
Thanks for sharing.
A.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Audie for that lovely response. All good things.

Chris