When The Heart Chooses

When The Heart Chooses

A Poem by Chris Shaw

love defies all logic
all boundaries, land and sea
it permeates through walls of rock
through doors without a key

unafraid of any borders
undeterred by darkest night
it doesn't need two wings to soar
or eyes to give it sight

love settles where the heart says
it's carried on each breath
it burns as if by magic
it can't be killed by death

in truth it's unrestricted
not caged within a home
it can float into the heavens
it can comfort when alone

its fervour undisputed
true love remains unshaken
its diamond strength enduring
its presence unmistaken

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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dear Chris... a year later... and it seems the World is topsy Turvey. However, Love is a feeling that we choose through all sorts of Weather.
Our feathered friends still gather to sing their Songs, and I leave Seeds for them... for strength and fortitude. Be blessed... Pat

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

10 Months Ago

Dear Pat your lovely words and visit are a gift. Thank you dear friend for stopping by today.
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Oh I loved the second stanza most definitely! Very good writing on love, such a complicated emotion but at its best it is so simple. Lovely!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

10 Months Ago

Thank you dear friend for visiting this older poem. Have a great week-end.

Chris
Beautiful thoughts Chris very nicely expressed and put together - excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Chris Shaw

10 Months Ago

Thank you Tony for your lovely review. Know you are appreciated.

Chris
red93

10 Months Ago

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dear Chris... a year later... and it seems the World is topsy Turvey. However, Love is a feeling that we choose through all sorts of Weather.
Our feathered friends still gather to sing their Songs, and I leave Seeds for them... for strength and fortitude. Be blessed... Pat

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

10 Months Ago

Dear Pat your lovely words and visit are a gift. Thank you dear friend for stopping by today.
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True to all of that and high fives. You said it all marvelously and truthfully in a wonderful poetic form. If money makes the world go round, then love makes the hearts go round to encompass us all.
Thank you for sharing with us your talent.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sami for your very generous words and for stopping by today. You are appreciated.
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Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

My pleasure. You are welcome Chris.
Dear Chris,
You have depicted love in its classical form.I love your rhymed piece and feel that love is divine.
Thank you for sharing the lovely poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Dear zainul, thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I really appreciate you stopping by today.. read more
Real nice, Chris. I read a book once written by an Episcopal priest who wrote that love is a decision and a commitment. Love is one area where English doesn’t have enough words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Pleased you liked the poem and I thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Chris
This is words painted with beauty. I love the peacefulness and warmth it gives. Love does go on, and death can't kill it. Nicely done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thank yous Karen for your lovely review. Happy Saturday.

Chris
KAREN

1 Year Ago

My pleasure!
I came across this gem again, beautiful dearest Chris, so beautiful, You always know how to express with words in an elegant wonderful way. Love to You ❤️

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear lightsong, I so appreciate this second visit from you to read When The Heart Chooses. Thank you.. read more
This is very beautiful poem... well written

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Crosby, I appreciate your encouraging review.

Chris
I hadn't read this previously and that was an unfortunate miss
Although this is girly stuff, it is done in the style I most appreciate and reads as well as a gentle flowing stream that burbles with this wonderful bit of imagery
Definitely high on your list of contributions and obviously I am not the only one who enjoyed
Sun must have been shining on this day

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Hello Dave, thank you for reading my girlie stuff:) Like that it flows like a gentle stream. Have a .. read more

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Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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