When The Going Gets Tough

(for my darling sis facing a mountain)

though the darkness clings to silence

in a never ending night

in the distance there's a flicker

from a far off source of light

as i stand to greet its presence

i recall our father's voice

when he stated life's a challenge

yet we always have a choice

we can fold and let it break us

we can crumble from its weight

we can take the reins and drive it

till the road ahead is straight

when the tough days come to find us

our resolve should dig in deep

so our inner strength can guide us

when the pathway seems too steep

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I bet your sister is bolstered & honored by your poem. I get the feeling you & your bloodlines are probably pretty tough & resilient & persistent, no matter how hard the road. This poem feels like a strong person urging on another strong person & I love how you invoke your dad's words to seal the deal. If only everyone struggling had a sister like you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Margie for this lovely review. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Dreamer Sima]

When the tough days come to find us/our resolve should dig in deep.... So powerful statement. If it is not strong then any black storm can blow us away. But if the resolve is strong then only our misty eye can see a flickering of light that is coming from a far off place. I hope your loved ones got the strength to fight off such sadness... I am feeling really blessed to be a friend of yours... Love and hugs

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Sima for that generous and uplifting response. You are appreciated.

Chris

[The Ink Chapters]

This is an empowering poem, I love the inspiration it brings. It is so true that we can either fight and persevere or we can crumble and allow it to break us. And sometimes we just need to be broken down so we can rebuild. Lovely poem, great read.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you so much. I wrote these lines for my sis. She has just lost her husband to covid. I was reminding her of our Dad's outlook on life. I am pleased to say she is her father's daughter. Many, many thank yous for your valued review.

Chris

[The Ink Chapters]

I'm so sorry for your families loss. Covid is a hell of a time for so many. Hey if you are online which it seems you are, take a look at the short story i just posted if you are bored. it's creepy so not everyone's cup of tea so if you don't want to i understand. but it was such a fun write i'm interested to see what others think!

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you for your condolences. I have paid your story a visit. All good wishes.

[Dave]

Chris - this is so powerful and exhilarating. What an inspiration to someone who needs that extra push to see things through. Thank you for sharing.

Take care - Dave

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Dave. We have just lost my brother in law to covid, so my sis needs as much support as she can get. I always appreciate the kindness of your visits. Take care.

Chris

[Dave]

Oh my, I'm so sorry for you and your sis. Believe it or not, among those that I pray each evening is for you and "Barleygirl" All I ask is that He keeps you safe.
Chris - please, I pray, stay safe and the rest of your family too. - Dave

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Dave you are so kind and I thank you. Please stay safe yourself.

[Relic]

Lots of inspiration in these lines, Chris.

Excellent poem.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Many thanks Tim. Good to see you. Hope you are well and be sure to keep safe.

Chris

[Weeping willow]

The struggles of life seem harder in these days and times and so understand these words of yours ;-] Nicely expressed and I feel them.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Many thanks Weeping willow. Your visit is appreciated.

Chris

[Broken.]

Learning strength from past obstacles is probably the best and hardest thing to do in life. But it is true, the more you overcome the stronger you become, and it helps when pessimism comes to rear its ugly head. I hope to harness this power one day haha. Great piece. I love the lines-
we can fold and let it break us
we can crumble from its weight
we can take the reins and drive it
till the road ahead is straight"..

I love these lines because the last line is so powerful in its meaning. Thank you for sharing

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you for checking in Broken to share your thoughts. Most appreciated.

Chris

[Robert Trakofler]

Amen Chris! we just have to be strong thru this last patch of broken road and we will find the right paths we have made it this far no turning back now!

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Bunny. Pleased to see you checking in. Take care.

Chris

[John the Baptist]

I can offer no greater praise than to say that Churchill would have loved this one.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

That is high praise John. Many thank yous.

Chris

[DIVYA]

A heartfelt poem for a much loved sister...
Tough days come to everyone but blessed are those that get to hear such caring words from their loved ones. The most troubled heart would be comforted by such light.
Beautifully expressed Chris. ♥️

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Dear DIVYA, thank you so much for your kind comments. You are very much admired and appreciated.
read moreDear DIVYA, thank you so much for your kind comments. You are very much admired and appreciated.

Chris

[Wild Rose]

Encouraging words for your sis in her struggle
We wish her well

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Wild Rose. Your visit much appreciated. Keep safe.

Chris