When The Going Gets Tough

When The Going Gets Tough

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(for my darling sis facing a mountain)

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though the darkness clings to silence
in a never ending night
in the distance there's a flicker
from a far off source of light

as i stand to greet its presence
i recall our father's voice
when he stated life's a challenge
yet we always have a choice

we can fold and let it break us
we can crumble from its weight
we can take the reins and drive it
till the road ahead is straight

when the tough days come to find us
our resolve should dig in deep
so our inner strength can guide us
when the pathway seems too steep

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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This is a great poem of inspiration especially with how the last year has went. Many have had trials and struggles we never thought we’d see in our lifetime. This is a great way of looking at it. Take hold and take the struggle head on and move it in the direction you want it to travel.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you PB for your generous review. When the going gets tough we have to harness everything we've.. read more
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Amen Chris! we just have to be strong thru this last patch of broken road and we will find the right paths we have made it this far no turning back now!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Bunny. Pleased to see you checking in. Take care.

Chris
I can offer no greater praise than to say that Churchill would have loved this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

That is high praise John. Many thank yous.

Chris
A heartfelt poem for a much loved sister...
Tough days come to everyone but blessed are those that get to hear such caring words from their loved ones. The most troubled heart would be comforted by such light.
Beautifully expressed Chris. ♥️

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dear DIVYA, thank you so much for your kind comments. You are very much admired and appreciated.
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Encouraging words for your sis in her struggle
We wish her well

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Wild Rose. Your visit much appreciated. Keep safe.

Chris
This is more than a poem, tis a plea from both heart and mind. Can personally sympathise but.. could never have had the incredible ability to say what you have. Your dear father certainly lives in you.. as you do for others Chris. Candle flickering.. and a hug, if I may.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dear Em, thank you so much for your very generous review. Keep safe and well. All good wishes.
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emmajoy

3 Years Ago

Meant it, Chris. Have had a bit of a day; here is slow, frustrated, rushed away, forgot to log out!.. read more
I agree dear Chris.
"when the tough days come to find us
our resolve should dig in deep
so our inner strength can guide us
when the pathway seems too steep"
The above lines. Hard and true. We must go forward and hope we land on our feet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dear Coyote, many thanks for your continued encouragement. I very much appreciate your visits. Take .. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I love your work dear Chris and you are welcome.
Very good.
This is just the kind of poem I needed to read.
Thanks for Sharing =-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Many thanks Audie for your very encouraging review. All good wishes.

Chris
If we don't break at one point, we never rise, if we don't face trails, we never know how strong is our inner being, if we never have faith, we will never know how blessed we are, sooner or later... my darling Chris, this beautiful poem of both empathy and wisdom, care and giving, just the other face of what my poem (the last one You reviewed) was speaking about, Your sister is blessed to have You, I pray things will get better so soon, and this stage of hard trail will lead to a beautiful garden of bliss, it's enough that You've penned this to change the effects into bright positive one💞Love and Light✨💖✨

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dearest lightsong, many thank yous for your beautiful review. Touched my heart you did.

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I really loved this poem! The way your words flowed from one line to the next was so good. 100/100 all the way!

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Nix for checking in and leaving such an encouraging review.

Chris
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rew
very sweet very nice

regards from rew

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you rew. I appreciate your visit.

Chris

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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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