since there is no logical parallel to what the world is experiencing, we have to turn to the poets to try and make sense of this. All of this. God commands this shelter from pain perhaps; this metaphoric proposition that not only occupies our grief but rolls back the stone of uncertainty if the angels are too busy.....dana
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Thank you Dana for sharing your thoughts. A welcome visit from you. All the best.
Chr.. read moreThank you Dana for sharing your thoughts. A welcome visit from you. All the best.
dearest Chris... a powerful poem of leaving earth where mourning is felt in so many homes.
The moon will still shine in the heavens where stars will reminisce and gather the memories of those lost. The vaccine is being prepared and millions will be prepared. A healing potion across Oceans. Be Brave... Be Well.. Amen
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Dear Pat, the vaccine is the way out of this. It will take time though. Many thank yous.
read moreDear Pat, the vaccine is the way out of this. It will take time though. Many thank yous.
My condolences. The pain comes through piercingly in this offering. Yes, the beast's belly does remain unfilled, and the end is not yet. I heard today that the US death total for covid is now greater than that for its combat deaths in WW2. Yet we will endure until the beast is dead.
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Thank you John. The beast will die for sure, but he is not finished yet by a long way and will break.. read moreThank you John. The beast will die for sure, but he is not finished yet by a long way and will break many more hearts.
You have captured the "broken" feeling of our country...and the world for that matter. (we are empty of heart and soul) How I have felt this. ~Sharon
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We can survive the battleground and we will, but it will take time. Thank you dear Sharon. Keep safe.. read moreWe can survive the battleground and we will, but it will take time. Thank you dear Sharon. Keep safe and well.
Oh, i am so sorry to hear he has passed.
Your poem says it all Chris, our hearts are grieving, not just for our own but for the all the souls this dreaful virus has so cruelly taken from us.
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Thanks Stella. The enemy is powerful, but can be beaten. We have the means to do it, but there will .. read moreThanks Stella. The enemy is powerful, but can be beaten. We have the means to do it, but there will be many more casualties.
This is a wonderful remembrance for an awful event
It must be a terrible shock to have this situation strike so close, leaving a family in such sorrow
These are certainly very difficult times
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The battle is in full swing. The enemy is powerful, but it can be beaten. We have the means, but it .. read moreThe battle is in full swing. The enemy is powerful, but it can be beaten. We have the means, but it will take more time and sadly many more casualties. We are just another family who knows its pain.
I love how you begin with a more broad suffering, emptiness, pain and mourning for 400,000 US deaths , not just us, but all around the globe, the greed of one leader, chaos, death never to forget;
Then you bring it a to more personal level, your dear brother- in-law, a loving person for whom you are mourning at present; “leaves a deluge of rain”
Excellent work, Chris...peace and condolences, Betty
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World wide and personal, the battle is in full swing. There will be many more casualties before the .. read moreWorld wide and personal, the battle is in full swing. There will be many more casualties before the back of this beast is broken. Thank you dear Betty.
Have been at Writerscafe for two years now, content to be in the company of like minded souls who love poetry. There are many talented poets on this forum.
Have been reading poetry most of my life,.. more..