Calls A Graveyard

far away in southern Devon

as the crow flies to the sea

where white crested waves are rolling

where green hills are rising gently

where thick red clay cakes the wet boot

in a graveyard lies my father

with a wish to speak to me

"close your eyes your heart will guide you

do not pine for long lost loved ones

do not wish me back to find you

with your grey eyes sadly misted

in a world i don't remember

nurture all who struggle daily

in your living family

stand beside your little sister

as you did when you were children

when her tears spilled out in sorrow

when her knees were grazed and bleeding

take her hand and lead her forward

through her darkest days of grieving

serving her, you do so me"

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Chris, this is, you've heard it before, such a heartfelt write. This is a poem that so easily moves the reader. An emotional write that stirs the emotions in the reader's heart. My mum and dad are both gone now and I miss them every day. They are still with me. Your wonderful poem touched me. Hugs always....Mike.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Mike, I appreciate your thoughful review. Many thank yous for stopping by.

Chris

[shadrach hah]

You are always welcome, Chris. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike.

[Melinda McQueen]

What a sweet poem filled with emotion.
This touched me. I lost my mom two years ago.
Nicely conveyed.

[Chris Shaw]

Sorry Melinda, a belated thank you.

Chris

[Melinda McQueen]

You're welcome.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Absolutely beautiful
Loved this

[Chris Shaw]

Sorry, a belated thank you Julie.

Chris

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks that’s ok 👍

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks that’s ok 👍

[mattavelli]

Hello, Christine! :)
I really enjoyed this poem. The first section stands alone with imagery and texture. It is haunting. All together this is a lovely expression of your love for your family and your feeling of duty. Thanks for sharing.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you mattavelli. Pleased you enjoyed the read. Your thoughts so encouraging.

Chris

[The Proletarian]

Brilliant. It's been a while since a piece of writing has made me feel something.
This reminded me that I have a heart, a joy to read.

[Chris Shaw]

What an encouraging review. Thank you so much.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

This poem touched my heart, Chris. I go to the cemetery where my parents are buried frequently. I bring flowers and "talk" with them. They still lead me in the right direction as your father does for you. I think every parent wants to know that their children will lean on one another once they are gone. You obviously loved your dad very much. Beautifully written. Lydi**

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Lydi** Yes, you are so right.

Chris

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

Powerful poem. Descriptive without over doing it, good imagery too. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you my friend. Appreciate the visit.

Chris

[Just Kim]

I feel some sadness in this, but yet is written wonderfully...

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kim. Yes, there is sadness, but there is also a message filled with wisdom.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... it is true... I Believe our Spirit lives on... in some ways through the Spirit of those we leave behind. When my Mother passed... I felt so much of her would live on in me.. and that is where my best comes from.
She really loved the birds and flowers and children. She stood by her family through good times and difficult times. She was always there to listen and understand. That is the true essence of Life. A lovely poem with deepest revelations. truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat your lovely review is so much appreciated. Thank you for gracing my page. Your footstep is so welcome.

Chris

[Gee]

Beautifully put together Christine. This my fav of all read of yours so far :))

[Chris Shaw]

Aw that is kind of you to say Gee. Pleased you enjoyed this one. Have a good weekend.

Chris

[adornoscousin]

We need those guides and helping hands more than ever. We need that help. And your poem captures this.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks for your lovely review Adornoscousin. I appreciate you checking in.

Chris