Day Break Wakes Easy

warm in love's embrace

confetti kisses capture

early morning bliss

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

Early morning bliss seems to have finally settled in here- a colder spring this year but bright early mornings are increasingly a welcome sight
Watching more move to the country programs, the scenery is really beautiful, little country lanes, stone walls, green fields, etc.

[Chris Shaw]

You know that programme is so good, but the property prices are normally out of my bracket :) Well, they are for what I want, just my own castle :) English countryside is tops Dave. Thanks for checking in.

Chris

[barleygirl]

Your poem includes my favorite things: embrace, kisses, bliss! Love "confetti kisses" & much more that makes this feel playful & flirty fun. Here's hoping your spring has sprung or will soon! We've had about a week of spring & now I'm fully fevered! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

We have had snow today Margie after high temperatures last week. Spring is playing coy. Many thanks for your lovely review.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... your Senryu is a romantic gesture that
soothes our feathers with confetti kisses. I almost
missed this "morning bliss". This is my favorite of
your romantic notions. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, so pleased you enjoyed this little senryu. Some warmth on a very cold day. We had snow on wake up this morning.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

My goodness Chris... so unusual for you to have Snow in England... although it is beautiful and good moisture for the Earth and Garden. I bought small yellow daffodils where the bulbs were in bloom. It is so sweet to have them in the kitchen Window. Now that we are retired, flowers close by is wonderful therapy to reduce stress. Of course the will be planted outside to com up next year. Be brave and be safe. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Enjoy your daffodils Pat. The snow didn't last, it's gone today. It still remains cold though.

[lightsong]

Oh my my dear dear Chris! even in your shorter poems you write powerfully! this is so magical "confetti" then "kisses" that's a Brilliantly beautiful use of a word... so dreamy this little colorful gem✨

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you lightsong. Akwats encouraging you are with your comments. So much appreciated.

read moreThank you lightsong. Akwats encouraging you are with your comments. So much appreciated.

Chris

[Neville]

........ What a way to go tho eh' .. simply splendid Chris .......... N :)

[Chris Shaw]

Nothing like a bit of warmth on a cold day. Snow again this morning after the heat of last week. Spring is acting somewhat coy. Many thank yous Neville.

[Neville]

...... we have had nowt but sun and wind ... maybe the radishes I had for my tea last eve ...
:)

[Chris Shaw]

Radishes can certainly whip up some wind :))

[Neville]

...... you could say that yes, I ate them in a rush .. you could say a hurrycane ...........
:)

[Chris Shaw]

One way to ensure social distancing takes place :)) How to evacuate a room in seconds:)

[Remanence]

This is impressive. Such a moment.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Watercress. Those moments are well worth remembering and writing about. Thank you so much for your review.

Chris

[Nix Is Still Typing...]

Oh, Chris, I love this! I really felt the love radiating offa this senryu :) Thank you for sharing :)

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Nix. Pleased you enjoyed. All good things.

Chris

[Relic]

That's some of the best kind of mornings, isn't it? :)

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Tim, thank you for checking in. Yes, that is certainly the best way to start a day. Hope all is good in your part of the world.

Chris

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I read this poem and felt showered in affection. What a way to start each day.
It was like a wonderful dream.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Zeitgeist. Many thanks for your visit to my page and for the lovely uplifting comment left for my senryu. Most appreciated.

Chris

[emmajoy]

Think the best way I can describe your three lines is 'charming with a warm echo' (Or, although less literate is said to be, 'Toasty') Have a safe and happy day, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Em. I think toasty is an apt way to describe these lines. Thank you. Keep safe and well.

Chris

[emmajoy]

Toasty might not be the most literary of words but, oh boy, does one's smile glow when saying it! Take care of yourself, stay safe, and, of course, keep toasty!

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Em. Another sleepless night finds me here :)

[emmajoy]

Officially am on the helpline. so having to keep an eye on the light! But yes, know what sleepless nights are like... since uni days, have done more dozing than dreaming! As long as you can find some great words to read, at least your mind and perhaps, emotions, are being stirred. Keep safe, plus, keep cookied and sipped. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Ah yes, have tea and cookies next to me :))

[emmajoy]

Hot chocolate and yet another cookie.. need go in a few.. this is the time when .. only three calls this past while. Take care..

[Chris Shaw]

And you :)

[Arthur Henn]

Early morning bliss. All wrapped in four seasons.

Beautifully written.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous Arthur for giving this senryu your consideration. All the best.

Chris