Saplings

Saplings

A Poem by Chris Shaw
"

(in awe of young carers, this one was 16)

"
consider Riley half grown 
who sports broad shoulders
matched by a strong resolve
.
who says his once peaceful home
was his own small sanctuary until
it became his daily entrapment
.
where he selflessly cares for
his blind and disabled mother
during tedious lockdown loneliness
.
not forgetting both his old grans
whom he runs errands for
though he dares not take the bus
.
preferring to walk as he fears
picking up the virus and passing it 
unknowingly to those he loves most
.
you do not hear him complain
he recognises there are other young
carers far worse off than he
.
a child with compassion is Riley
and other children like him
caring for members of family
.
in extraordinary circumstances
pause a moment to reflect on
unwavering devotion in hard times
.

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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I love this sweet tribute to young Riley! There's lots more going on the minds and hearts of kids than meets the eye. ...Reminds me of when my ex-wife and I broke up and my then-8-yr-old son, Paul, would, for weeks afterwards, walk to my new apartment after school to make sure I was ok :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Young people often get a bad time, but then there are plenty like Riley who prove they can rise to t.. read more



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Riley is a carer in real life ?
How awesome a poem this is
Loved it
His selfless unwavering duty to his loved ones a sacrifice only he will realise when he’s old enough to miss his youth

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Julie, a tribute to Riley. What an awesome sixteen tear old he is. Heard him talking on the r.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Years Ago

Great
Of course I didn’t hear it here in oz but there’s many young carers worldwide <.. read more
It is interesting that the hard times bring about instances of rising to whatever can become difficult challenges to overcome.
Obviously a very special young guy

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

He was awesome to listen to. A real credit to his family. Thanks for checking this one out Dave. Hav.. read more
dear Chris... this poem “Sapling” is very endearing... we are very fortunate to survive this Pandemic. The young people are very Brave and do keep our Spirits full of Hope and they do help us whenever possible. tenderly, Pat

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Pat. There are many young people doing marvellous things to help the oldies out. They.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Chris... I came across your poem again...
young people still have the wonderful Spirit .. read more
I adore them, I respect them, those young ones who carry on their hearts and shoulders burdens we can't imagine, their responsibile, patient, and determined spirits, specially when they don't complain. Many many thanks for sharing this story with us, the beautifuuuul amazing and outstanding Riley🤍❤️🤍 BTW your title is so wonderful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much lightsong for my little tribute to Riley. What an awesome young man and such a cre.. read more
With all of the bad news coming out of the pandemic, there are instances of quiet heroism that might go unnoticed save for poems such as this one. Riley's age is not stated, though he is obviously youthful, a time normally associated with pleasant pursuits. He has forgone these to help not only his blind mother, but also his two grandmothers. A lot of his efforts involve walking in order to avoid possible infection on buses. Not a whole lot of time for fun, but he fulfills his duties without complaint. If many of the coming generations are like this fellow, perhaps the world is not so bad off after all.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much John, Riley is sixteen. When I listened to him on the radio, he brought tears to m.. read more
The distance between Boomers and Gen Z regarding inter-generational ethics and compasson values has never been greater here in the USA and is uplifting to hear of such dedication amd maturity displayed by one so young. You have extended excellent recognition and this sapling will undoubtedly become one of the "oaks" of Gen Z. Great job Chris!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are so right about the differences between boomers and Gen Z, Watercress. We have a couple livi.. read more
Remanence

2 Years Ago

What you example to your young charges is what we all should be doing. To reach across the years to.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

How kind you are. We try our best :) Thank you.
During this crazy time in the world there are many who have taken on care giving roles because some dare not venture out because of health issues. There are many that do this when there isn’t a pandemic and it isn’t an easy role.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Difficult role for anyone, but for kids who have to fit their school work in as well, most challengi.. read more
Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

This pandemic definitely has made everything more difficult for everyone. Even simple things aren’.. read more
Such an heartfelt write really, so nicely written and expressed

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Unspoken. Your thoughts welcome and appreciated.

Chris
Chris, I just love the way you present your writing. I feel as though I have walked into your gallery and immediately recognize the artist as you by your for and content. And then to knock it out of the part with a really challenging topic? Well done. This year long last has been so difficult for everyone is so many different ways and circumstances. It's nice to point out a little faith in the younger crowd of humanity. Love this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Amber, your review lifts my spirits. Thank you so much poet for your kind words. Take care.read more

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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