Echoes Of Lavender

(a revamped poem)

mist rises as newly birthed disc

of sun kisses easterly horizon's cheek

promising heightened heat on a 

sultry summer day

clouds like chariots fly past at rapid

speed in a part blue sapphire sky

hurtling on a journey to certain

dissipation

we walk waist high through scented

spikes of  fragrant purple lavender

alive with a charm of worker bees

buzzing busily at the seams

he asks me if this is a touch of heaven

I don't know I replied though when I

die if it echoes what we share here

then maybe dreams become reality

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... another Summer is fading into Autumn... and still your poem has touched my heart... our Crepe Myrtle is in full bloom and the colours stir our emotions. A kiss of Hibiscus will be a way to survive until God gives us Spring. Winter has its Beauty with silhouettes of bygone days. Another Year to Pray... Amen.. Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, so pleased you enjoyed my echoes of lavender poem. I do not know what a Creoe Myrtle is, so I will have to look it up. Always pleased to receive such poetic responses from your the flourish of your pen. All good wishes,

Chris

[Seuwandi]

"sultry summer" I loved it. It created such a vivid picture in my mind. No im longing to walk among lavenders!Goodluck. amazing work

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Seuwa Di for your thoughtful review. Appreciate you dropping by.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Setting a most colorful, gorgeous scene for a a few words of love between the two describing how this feels to them HEAVEN...the last lines are so touching...and a thoughtful ending.... I love the images, they just pop out at us; well done Chris!!!
PS, your poetry is so soft, you have a knack for these special words and setting a stunning scene.
Stay well, and enjoy summer!
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

Your reviews dear Betty, are always so thoughtful. Many thank yous.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks, so are yours! Happy times...😊

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love lavender
Lavender Yardley talc n perfume
Lavender essential oil before bed on pillow and neck n temples helps me sleep
Lavender colour so beautiful
Loved your descriptives so beautiful 🤩

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Julie, pleased you enjoyed the read.

Chris

[Chris Shaw]

My maternal nan liked Yardley lavender talc Julie. Remember it well :)

[Remanence]

As John Denver said: "You fill up my (our) senses." Exceptionally well done and truly beautiful descriptions.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Watercress. The fragrance coming from a field of lavender is divine. I appreciate you.
read moreThank you Watercress. The fragrance coming from a field of lavender is divine. I appreciate you.

Chris

[Remanence]

Lavender is special and I cannot imagine a pleasant space without the sweet smell and eye appeal of fresh cut flowers.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear Chris.
"we walk waist high through scented
spikes of fragrant purple lavender
alive with a charm of worker bees
buzzing busily at the seams"
I loved the above lines and a flower filled field of lavender. Next week in Michigan. The lavender festival will happen. I always try to go to. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

I hope you enjoy the lavender festival Coyote. Walking the seams is a memorable experience.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Chris. I will on the fifth of June. I hope you are doing well and staying safe.

[Azifwecare]

Ms. Shaw I sure wish I knew how to paint because your descriptions are so divine with this scene I can see myself wandering thru these fields. I really love that last line...if it echoes what we share here then maybe dreams become reality. I wonder what he would have replied to this. Such a lovely poem lady, thank you for sharing.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Silent for your lovely review.

Chris

[Kerra]

Something to ponder on, really nicely written. Enjoyed this intriguing write

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kerra for visiting and leaving your thoughts. Pleased to see you here.

Chris