Be Kind he said, be kind

glory be for damaged things

for butterflies with broken wings

for birds that can not chirp or sing

on mornings when the sun

won't shine

and for that rose whose petals fell

upon the crazy paving's path

whose loveliness you

once did praise

don't let that memory slip away

with thoughts of tincture and

decay

or for the friends who broke your trust

like rust upon an iron chain

increasing with the falling rain

don't focus on the sorrow felt

but more upon the joy they gave

for all the hurts that wound your mind

whose marks have left behind a scar

recall the positives instead

regardless of the damage done

don't harbour all the tears he said

reach out to grasp a smiling sun

consideration is a plus

compassion in this world a must

be kind he said be kind

Reviews

[lightsong]

to say this is a masterpiece would be underrated, I don't know how You even managed to compose the first two verses, they are not only beautiful, they hold rare beauty that beauty where life's essence flows, perfect poem in these holy times... heavenly written from again such a wise elegant and fair Lady.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear lightsong for that very generous review. Apologies for the delay in thanking you.
read moreThank you dear lightsong for that very generous review. Apologies for the delay in thanking you.

Chris

[lightsong]

NEVER apologize for such a thing my dear, please take care of yourself and recover soon🤗

[Chris Shaw]

Many, many thanks.

[lightsong]

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[shadrach hah]

Hi Chris, another outstanding poem of emotion from your pen. I have had friends who have turned on me without any cause, to these people I still have fond memories. Maybe we just push the bad memories to the backs of our minds. This is a poem to lighten the day. May we always have good feelings for everyone and everything. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Mike for stopping by and leaving such a lovely review. You are appreciated.

Chris

[shadrach hah]

Hi Chris, you are welcome. I always find it a pleasure to drop by your poetry. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs always....Michael.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Christine! :)
This is lovely poetry. The feeling of it flows smoothly and the words read rhythmically. And the message is kindness, which is as good as it gets. I imagine this poem could brighten anyone's mood. Thanks for sharing.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much mattavelli for your thoughtful review and for stopping by. All good wishes.

Chris

[Kerra]

Love that last stanza so much, so truthful, if we all could just be kind to another we probably could love each other more.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kerra for your thoughtful review. You are appreciated. All the best to you.

Chris

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This was a heartfelt piece on forgiveness and moving on. The parts that spoke of broken trust really moved me because I have had to endure so much disappointment in those I once believed in. It truly takes the virtue of grace to forgive profound wrongs in life. The kinds we could never forget which leave indelible scars on the heart. You have woven a strong emotive piece of poetry Chris. One I take to heart.

[Chris Shaw]

I am so pleased dear Carlos that my poem touched your heart. I thank you for your encouragement and support with my writing. Hope you are well and happy.

Chris