February Calling

Spontaneous write

January a month of ghastly …

ghosts goodbyes and shadows
suffocating
where even the limbs of our silver birch
sigh with grief and wave weak
in their doldrum sorrow

insipid is the winter garden
drear in despondent gloom
January a month without mirrors
can’t end too cursing soon

in hibernation
don’t find me they say
for the love of the Lord
don’t look at yourself
even your own skin
is a sickly shade of grey

a countdown to days ahead
where those beds where the bulbs rest
will bring signs of life

wait for the first snowdrops to appear
or crocus in golden clumps bid hello
as the most wicked month in the
calendar year retreats
while I cheer with my hearts drum beat

February calling

Reviews

[JustPlainHere]

This is really gorgeous with its rhythm and alliteration. I love the descriptions as well. It seems all the cheer is reserved for the ushering in of the cold season, but then there's none left for the rest of it. We're all a little gray for those months - which leads me to really identify with the fourth stanza. Seeing myself in the mirror during those months, with their draftiness and dampness is really depressing. I love how the poem ends with the thought of snow, and how that at least gives us something. January being just a cold barren emptiness between the holiday season and snow season.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your very thoughtful review. I appreciate you stopping by to share JPH.

Chris

[JustPlainHere]

Very much my pleasure.

[Dave Brown]

I could easily expand the list to include Dec and Feb (in so far as weather goes)
then there is Mar. which often doesn't try hard enough and Nov. which can also be fairly tough.
Possibly, I just like to complain

[Chris Shaw]

You just don’t like winter, period Mr Brown. It is only January that I really dislike as it is the month of many losses. Keep warm and thank you for checking in.

Chris

[Gee]

Tis the most depressing month coming off the back of weeks of festive celebrating and with Spring still a couple of months away. We always book a February break to grab a few rays, this year off to Thailand celebrating a friends 60th...can't come soon enough.
Your well written words sum up the feelings of many Christine.
Happy New year, hope you are all well and your sloggies still fit :))

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Gee and happy new year. Lucky me, no wait gain. January is the month of anniversaries. Not the best month for either me or for my siblings. Can’ t wait for it to go. All the best

Chris

[Lisasview]

Hi Chris,
Great to read a poem of yours I have not read before.
What an interesting subject… really so clever.
What is so amazing is to see all those lovely bulbs pop up. Because we live in Spain many unexpected flowers pop up in December and January… they are blooming rather early because of the warm weather here.
I really enjoyed your rhyming…
Lisa, glad to be back and reading, reviewing and posting!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lisa. So many anniversaries this month of loved ones departed. My siblings loathe it as much as I do. I appreciate you being the first to call.

Chris

[Lisasview]

The strange thing about me is that I can not tell you the date or year my parents and grandparents passed. Maybe I hate to think about it. None the less I miss them every day.
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

I think erasing the dates even subconsciously pays dividends. When you know when the date is approaching, there is a build up to it. Have a good day Lisa, well what’s left of it. Getting dark now.

[Lisasview]

You are so right...and very dark night oh but what a sunset.
Are you are Facebook? I post sunsets, etc.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes. I do have an account. Don’t often go there. What do you post under?

[Lisasview]

LisaStoloffRosenthal.
I am not all the time but if you scroll way down then you will see what has been going on with our house since we moved here 2 1/2 years ago...