On the Scent of Pine

imagine
if all the souls
of our long departed
lit up the pine forest
at night like fireflies
in love

chasing
winking and blinking
beckoning us to their party
having a ball
while we

in wide eyed wonder
in silence and gratitude
watch in awe
a taste of timeless
of heaven’s potential
on the scent of
lasting pine

Reviews

[E.P. Robles]

In this captivating scene, a pine forest comes alive at night as departed souls illuminate it, resembling ethereal fireflies. The playful souls beckon us to join their celestial gathering, exuding joy and embracing newfound freedom. As humble observers, we stand in awe, aware that we are witnessing something beyond ordinary existence. This remarkable display offers a glimpse into the timeless and limitless potential of the heavens. The lasting pine scent grounds us in the sensory experience and symbolizes the enduring connection between souls. This vivid portrayal blurs the boundaries between life and the afterlife, inspiring reflection on the beauty, unity, and transcendence within the mysteries of existence.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you fur capturing the magical under the scent of forest pine. Yes, let’s imagine ……..

Chris

[Red Brick Keshner]

Pine is one of those childhood scents that accompany us throughout our days and generations. A much enjoyed nature poem Chris. Oh, btw (P.S. - your last 2 lines here in this poem reminded me of one of mine about pines: https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Excalibard/2834599/ )
Freds

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Freds. The scent of pine is memorable. I’ve never met anyone yet who doesn’t find it agreeable. I’ll check your link out to your own pine poem.

Chris

[Chris Shaw]

I tried your link, it came up that the work was deleted?

[Red Brick Keshner]

How is that for a bother. Perhaps it's changed link as the poem 'negotiable leave' is now highlighted, on the top of my poem list on the homepage. Was trying to make it more accessible for you. Apologies Chris.
Freds.

[Robert Trakofler]

wow, where did this come from:) what a delightful dream of a poem dear Chris! I clicked on this cause I love the smell of pine but I wasn't expecting this poem... what a fun trick! I would of course want to jump into the air and join them all "bunny-like" but alas I'm no spring bunny anymore LOL so I guess I would have to wait

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Bunny. I have been fascinated with fireflies for such a long time but have never seen them in the flesh so to speak. It will also be the first anniversary of my mum!s passing tomorrow , so she is on my mind. I guess the two pointed my muse in this direction. Really pleased you stopped by.

Chris

[Pauline]

Hi Chris. Living out in Malaysia we used to see these dancing fairies every night which was always a treat.
I love your poem by the way, but then it's always a treat to read your work.
(Hope you're looking after yourself.xx) P.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Pauline. Pleased you enjoyed the read. All good here, hope the same for you x

[Ladysue]

What a beautiful joyous poem. Lovely thoughts wrapped in creative beauty to conjure such glorious images. Loved this..

[Chris Shaw]

Ladysue, thank you so much for your lovely review. You have made my Sunday a better one.
read moreLadysue, thank you so much for your lovely review. You have made my Sunday a better one.

Chris

[Ladysue]

My Pleasure, Chis..Enjoyed it immensely..

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Hmmm. This is really nice. I have always had a thing for fireflies so this particularly appeals to me. You have created beautiful imagery with your words - a dream and a wish that we all wish that we could grasp. When we were young, we were at the drive-in, which had pine trees all around. There were thousands of fireflies lighting up the night. My 11-year-old sister asked my boyfriend, "How do they stay lit up like that?" His response, "They carry around little matchsticks." LOL! I have never forgotten that. It's funny the things that strike a chord with you and stay with you forever. Thanks for stoking the memory, Chris. This is lovely!

[Chris Shaw]

Really pleased that this little offering took you to a happy place. I love the matchstick response:) That made me smile. Thank you for another review Linda. Pleased to have you stop by.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

I'm wide-eyed in awe of your talent. I live in such place of rural Alabama, where pine, oak, cedar and magnolias grow abundantly. I like the smell of those indeed. I like where you took this poem and the message.

[Chris Shaw]

Sami, you are too generous by far. Thank you so much for your kindness. All good wishes.
read moreSami, you are too generous by far. Thank you so much for your kindness. All good wishes.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

What a beautiful scene you set
Scents of pine how refreshing esp if near a salty ocean
Beautiful write ✍️ xx

[Chris Shaw]

Julie, I thank you for your lovely review. So pleased to have you stop by today. Hope all is well with you.

Chris

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes thanks 🙏 hope you well

[Chris Shaw]

All good with me Julie thank you 🌸

[Lydia Shutter]

I loved this one, Chris. What a wonderful image you conjured with your words. Our dear departed lighting up the forest at night...letting us know they are okay. The wonder and awe comes through loud and clear. Lydi**

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lydi** for your encouraging review. Pleased you enjoyed my thoughts here. Happy for your visit and I hope all is good in your world.

Chris

[DIVYA]

I have never seen a pine forest and I think it must be very beautiful to behold in itself. If it was festooned with fireflies with such a surreal, otherworldly glow, the beautify would intensify so immeasurably. To me the thought signifies the beauty of your mind and your love for those most precious to you who now live in the world of heaven.
What a rapturous moment that would be, if we found them in that pine forest. All our grief would vanish forever and we'd know beyond doubt of life eternal with them. It would complete everything and we would never fear, grieve or weaken. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem, dear friend Chris. Reading you today just uplifted me and my day.

[Chris Shaw]

It really pleased me to think that something I have written can uplift. Thank you for a most poetic and beautiful review DIVYA.

Chris

[DIVYA]

It is my pleasure always to read and review your beautiful poetry, dear Chris.

[Laz K.]

To me, this poem is a reminder that nature is filled with some invisible presence, and also that perhaps there's no real separation between the living and the souls of those that already departed. A very sensitive and delicate write!

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Laz thank you for your visit and for sharing your thoughts. They were most welcome.
read moreDear Laz thank you for your visit and for sharing your thoughts. They were most welcome.

Chris

[Ken Simm.]

I am imagining it. Although I don't really have to living here. I love the structure and message of this poem.
It fits the layered subject so well.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ken so much. You have your own special brand of beauty up there in the highlands. Pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a good Saturday.

Chris