Zen at the fairground

Zen at the fairground

A Poem by Firebird
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The inside of my head is like a crazy fairground ride. Zen is the only cure.

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Cacophony
Blurred faces
Faster and faster, the lights revolving
Screaming and laughter
Make it stop!
The man with the beautiful face
Is pushing harder
Colours coalesce
Mutiplying madness
Until finally
whiteness prevails
Nothing remains
Seeking the blank wall
Being the blank wall.

© 2021 Firebird


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As I am interested in controlling thoughts through meditation and affirmation, I was drawn to this offering. The carnival scene imagery is effective in conveying the effects of revving thoughts. The last lines show an abrupt cessation of those thoughts. The speaker's mind has merged with its source. Zen can indeed be powerful, but it is not easy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

2 Years Ago

It isn't easy. Thank you for reading and understanding. Best wishes to you for a peaceful ride.



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I am a longstanding student of Kongo Zen ......... Bodhidharma would just love this .. You took the wall write out my head too, by the way ... 😊


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


what an extraordinarily small world .. when I lived much closer than I do now, I was a frequ.. read more
Firebird

2 Years Ago

Yes. I would like to go sometime but it's a long way from Berkshire. I have practiced at the Zen pri.. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago


.. they do get around, dont they .. go well my friend
As I am interested in controlling thoughts through meditation and affirmation, I was drawn to this offering. The carnival scene imagery is effective in conveying the effects of revving thoughts. The last lines show an abrupt cessation of those thoughts. The speaker's mind has merged with its source. Zen can indeed be powerful, but it is not easy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

2 Years Ago

It isn't easy. Thank you for reading and understanding. Best wishes to you for a peaceful ride.
Fairgrounds are chaotic, especially those roller-coaster rides. Probably not the best place to meditate :) Wait till afterwards to clear your mind out and get some peace :) I enjoyed the read.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

2 Years Ago

The fairground was my mind. Peace must be found where you are.

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Added on June 29, 2021
Last Updated on June 29, 2021
Tags: Zen, Buddhism, Mental health, Peace

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Firebird
Firebird

United Kingdom



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