Spring

Spring

A Poem by catney123
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This is a poem I wrote describing how I see spring.

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The bright beautiful colors,
The smell of fresh grass and freshly bloomed flowers,
The long quiet peaceful days,
The never ending beauty,
The never ending color,
The long sky blue sky’s,
The big puffy white clouds,
The long big storms,
With their gray and black clouds,
With buckets of rain pouring down,
That help the flowers bloom,
To bring more color,
All of this is part of spring,
A time of color,
Peace,
And freedom.

© 2014 catney123


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catney123
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It made me feel like I was in a meadow smelling the flowers and just like your poem lead me there. Awesome job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

catney123

9 Years Ago

Thanks Aiden!
Aiden Christopher Pafford

9 Years Ago

Anytime. Shalom!!!
Totally love the last lines,

"All of this is part of spring,
A time of color,
Peace,
And freedom."

Well penned :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


catney123

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
Mirra

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :-)

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Added on October 9, 2014
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catney123

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