I just can't

I just can't

A Poem by Izzy Briles
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Super old song of mine.

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Still, I find it hard to love, through all the things we say.
I still love you anyway.
Stop, before we go too far, I know it's far too late.
I still want you today.

I can't wait to see my broken heart be fixed.
I cannot wait much longer.
I can't stand to see you in so much pain.
I will not wait much longer.

Breathe, just to get that high. I know I can't go on,
If I continue this way.
Stop, before we go too far, I know it's far too late.
I still love you today.

I can't wait to see my broken heart be fixed.
I cannot wait much longer.
I can't stand to see you in so much pain.
I will not wait much longer.

I'm standing here alone, like I always have been.
Can you take me where there's no more pain?
I want to be alone, still you follow.
I look up and I know I'm safe tonight.

© 2017 Izzy Briles


Author's Note

Izzy Briles
Ignore the cliché "ouch my emotions". This was written by me during a first-love type breakup. I would love feedback!

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Wow. It was amazing. I loved the way you have expressed those true feelings of longing for love and the time in waiting. Loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Izzy Briles

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Izzy Briles
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