A Secret

A Secret

A Poem by Ceilidh Hamm

I wonder if i had your life,
Would it be better,
or are there secrets you hide like the
skin that covers the pit of the cherry< 
Like mine,
You never know what someones hiding,
You never know if someones happy, 
Behind every smile there's a past
A secret.

© 2014 Ceilidh Hamm

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Eerie premise.

Careful with someones - it should be a contraction of someone is, so someone's
"i" - I
is the < a typo or intentional?

I have wondered this before, but this poem takes the pondering further.
Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on April 7, 2014
Last Updated on April 8, 2014
Tags: #life, #secret, #past, #depression


Ceilidh Hamm
Ceilidh Hamm


ive been going through a hard time and writing poems helps getting all my feelings out more..

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