Lost

Lost

A Poem by Ceilidh Hamm

do you ever feel like your slowly fading
away
just one more push, one more day
like your going to break into pieces
that will never be glued back together
just going to be blown away in the
wind
like the seeds of a dandelion
your scared
your mind just goes blank
lost in the wind 

© 2014 Ceilidh Hamm


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Ceilidh Hamm
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like your going to break into pieces: like you're going to
your scared: you're scared

I like the shaky-nervous, falling apart vibe you portray.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ceilidh Hamm

7 Years Ago

Thank I worked really hard on that part
Ohh I love this! :) Like a lot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ceilidh Hamm

7 Years Ago

thank you so much

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Added on April 7, 2014
Last Updated on April 8, 2014
Tags: #lost, #depression

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Ceilidh Hamm
Ceilidh Hamm

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