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A Poem by Kia

I woke up and you weren't there
I started to tear 
Rewind
My eyes close
It's dark
Cloudy
Then clearer
I'm at a game
Or carnival
Or walking through a crowd
My heart stops
I pause
And stare
There you are!
But how?
Then he raises his head
And what I once thought
Fizzles to unbelief
It's not you
Even though it was a dream
I miss you dad

© 2010 Kia


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Kia, I can relate to your loss all so clearly. This poem is excellent as I know just how you feel.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh...it's so sad. It's very beautiful though, nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kia
Kia

Beltsville, MD



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I am a 34 year old new freelance writer. After being in the working field since I was 16 and recently laid off I decided I would follow my true passion and write. Anywhere and everywhere I can. Paid a.. more..

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