Just a feeling

Just a feeling

A Poem by AaronFreitas

The taste of your skin 


passion into my heart.  


The touch of your body


my mind into a fanatical eruption.  



is the sensation 

of being with you, 


only a miracle from God himself

can guide you to me

as if it was destiny.  


I feel as if I’m walking through heaven

and you’re behind a half open door… 

teasing me 

with the angel I am missing out on. 


Unlike any emotion I have ever felt before,

Your inner beauty 

brings me to my knees, 

begging God please, 

to let me explore 

a world of ecstasy with you- 

who brings upon me

an epiphany of the reality of my destiny;

just guide you to me. 


I do not want to go on living 

this way, 

knowing that I could

fill your heart

with love for eternity.

And even though you have love,

I find you here

with me.

On my mind

in my heart 

I’m attached emotionally.  


What am I to do

with this feeling 

I have no control of?  

Should I 


before your eyes; 

leave you to be?


Or should I take this chance

and trust that you will see……

© 2015 AaronFreitas

Author's Note

This is a piece I wrote in December of 08... wish I remembered who it was about!
Edited to a format which I like much better than the free write I had. Thanks to Jan aka JayceeC :)

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This was really good, and full of true emotion, not just words. You wrote in a way that allows the reader to experience the feeling the speaker is experiencing as well, and that is a quality not many writers have, but all need so desperately.
Wonderful job!

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


5 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review and the compliments Anne :) I appreciate it very much :)


This is wonderful! I really liked the first part it draws my attention.

Posted 7 Months Ago

I thought the poem was both romantic and also somewhat sensual. The part having to do with the results of tasting skin and touching a body showcased the sensuality of the poem. It would be a good poem to recite to get one's significant other in the mood. It is also a good poem to think about when it comes to hesitating in giving love a chance.

Posted 1 Year Ago

This poem has tons of different feelings and emotions in it.
I guess that's the reason why the title is just a feeling.
This was quite a romantic write, tells such a story.
Its filled with such longing and was very deep indeed.
Seems pretty deep and meaningful for you to not remember who it was about.
Girl seems like she was a goddess to you haha.
Great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

Very good. I liked it speaks to me

Posted 5 Years Ago

This is so so beautiful Aaron, worth re-reading and re-reading, I like like like..such a piece of poetry gives me a lot of inspiration, it is like you have removed words inside that could not come out

Posted 5 Years Ago

That's the beauty of love, not having any control over what we feel. Yet, it's utterly revolting of how we can feel such things without having knowledge of what they really mean. I feel that love means we feel without knowing. We see a rainbow & Devils flames within the same week. Love can turn our emotions so upside down that we can barely recognize ourselves, but that's the beauty of it all...the power of love makes us feel every single bit & color of emotion we ever imagined! We can feel so happy, yet so angry at the same time. How is that possible? No one knows...but it is. It happens. It's love & we just gotta work best with what we've got. With it comes to love, we can't control what type of emotion we feel. Scary. But true.

Posted 5 Years Ago

This piece is very impressive. One of the most heart-touching and romantic poems I've ever read. It's very moving. You can feel the emotions in each word. I can almost remember how it feels to fall in-love again. haha I enjoyed reading this. Love the Author's Note.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Love this piece bro, how could you not remember who you wrote this for??? haha
Jan's awesome!

Posted 5 Years Ago

this nice very nice the softness the caring the love the tenderness
the details how luck the miracle that you have in your world

Posted 5 Years Ago

Take the chance because this word called "trust" has always served as an obstacle during such do or die moments. I think some things and notions should be discarded completely when it comes to such moments of ecstasy.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


5 Years Ago

Thanks for your review my friend... sorry it took so long to get back to you :)

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