ISOLATION

Co-written with the amazing JiDonnelly!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How could something so magic
a feeling so immense
dramatically turn tragic
awkward and intense?

 

How the seasons turned so cold

a heartbreaking scene

unraveling to fool’s gold

solitary and unforeseen…

You never will fully realize
how much you inspired me
practically perfect in my eyes
all I ever desired to be…

 

Moving ahead in silence now

how fragments are all I see

a haunting empty vow

adrift on a frozen sea…

Author's Note

Please stop by Jidonnelly’s page here at the Cafe. What a wonderful poet! http://www.writerscafe.org/JiDonnelly

Reviews

[Valentine]

Craig..well written and when love dies we all seem to ask ourselves the same questions..For which there are no logical answers..Kathie

[alice]

one word. beautiful.

[Mia]

What a wonderful collaboration! I couldn't tell which words were yours and which weren't.
"practically perfect in my eyes
all I ever desired to be…

Moving ahead in silence now
how fragments are all I see"
Fantastic lines.

[David Scott]

I like the title for this poem. I had to look at the words thru that filter to get a better understanding of your intent. Well done. I like the subtlety...

[Kristin Nicole]

Great poem, I truly loved it. Especially the last sentence.

[Daniel Eckert]

The second paragraph was spectacular. "A heart breaking scene--- unraveling to fool's god." I love it.

[Baby Ricochet]

What I like about this poem is it didn't annoy me as most poems about romance gone dry do. WC is loaded with these and most of them, well. This one though, good flow, good rhymes, it resisted the urge to turn into a Justin Bieber song. F**k man, I'm impressed. FIve golden stars from the milkyway for this piece. Well Done

[Carolyn Rinando]

Well written. Love and lust are the questions we ask when the emotion is new to us. It always seems as though we look to others for what oneself lacks.

[Sky]

Great collaboration! It's a hauntingly familiar emotion to be lost in the frozen sea of love. I have found a treasure, I'm so glad to have discovered your writings!

[Crazy Cat Man]

Nice