WISPY * W O R L D S * of * WONDERLAND

WISPY * W O R L D S * of * WONDERLAND

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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You are a poem painted wine blush..

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You are a poem painted wine blush

Richly on canvas rhythm, lavender lips

Lightness of hands, fingers caress.

           

Your name paints rose petal kisses

Across my lifted neck, as the shy sun

Licks drops from my sea-salt skin.

 

You are hues of rivers and rains

Tints and shades of desert-rift ripeness

Mountain-valley birdsong in mists.

 

Your colors dab-dropped on landscape

Across the azure sky, stroke on slow stroke

Olive and emerald on richest forest flower.

 

You are wispy worlds of wonderland

And the wind in two-toned lilac summers

Loves to dance in your sky-soft hair.


© 2019 An owl on the moon


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your poem of love just drips off the page, ink overflowing with honey. Very powerful love poem. Wonderful imagery is within the words you have penned. You are one poetic person.

Posted 1 Week Ago


This is so enchantingly beautiful and the imagery second to none. A poem every woman would love to own,
Quite magical. You have been given a great gift.

Grace.

Posted 3 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

3 Months Ago

I appreciate your kindness so deeply. It is more enchanted than almost anything else. :)
Grace

3 Months Ago

I meant every word. It's delightful.
Grace
wow what a portrait you have painted here...she is breathtaking to look at, imagine..appreciate...
the last stanza just blew me away...i wish i could write like that...damn.
really creative imagery...
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

4 Months Ago

Ah, my friend, your words always amaze me. Thank you for sharing some of them here on my page. :)
'Your name paints rose petal kisses - Across my lifted neck, as the shy sun - Licks drops from my sea-salt skin.'

As you have over many years your ' Wispy *Worlds* of Wonderland include phrases from a truly magical, sensual and radiant masterpiece. Your Alice couldn't have a finer creator. Beautiful

Posted 4 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

4 Months Ago

Funny story... at least 12 years ago when I was just starting out on this site, if a certain emmajoy.. read more
A love poem, and an incredibly beautiful ones. Your imagery is from heaven itself. You evoke the senses with this write and you have given this reader a scented bouquet.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Chris. Sometimes words can become the worlds we always longed for. :)
These words as I do meander slow through them yet again do indeed conjour up some of the most spectacular and beautiful images in my own head... and for that, I thank you muchly my friend.... All Good Things, Neville

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

Ah, Neville, thank you so much for meandering here. Your moments are always most welcome!
Neville Pettitt

5 Months Ago

Nowt but a pleasure sir, and that, it be all mine :)
A wispy wonderland Mother Nature made so delicately, lending all her laxurious treasure in measure.
" you are hues of rivers and rain " ... what a tribute it is to be compared to, "Tints and shades of desert- rift ripeness Mountain-valley birdsong in mist.
Always a spectacular treat to enjoy your poetry, Querido Craig. Muito bonito, Como sempre .

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

Muito obrigado, querida Mrudula. I always appreciate your insights into the world of words. In life .. read more
Mrudula Rani

5 Months Ago

A prazer é todo meu. Uma abraço.
Ahhh, just breathtaking, as always. Thank you for sharing your work, dear poet.

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

It really is a joy to share words with you here, dear friend. Thank you.
This is a delicious blend of (1) floatingly flowing imagery (2) subtle attention to word sounds (3) uninhibited combinations of observations. Each of these is nicely balanced into a lyrical whole. There's a severe lack of "wonder" in the world these days. I love that your writing resembles your title. I try to maintain a sense of wonder, which requires unplugging from the droning hoards quite a bit *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

Well, you said it, Margie! Yes... I fear wonder is going by the wayside. I see people staring at the.. read more
barleygirl

5 Months Ago

"Staring at their phones as sunset floods the sky" . . . true brilliance, my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I felt anointed with a euphoric feeling, like the awakening of spring, when I read this. You consistently engage the senses, time after time. Much enjoyed this, my friend!

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

Ah, and spring is my everlasting joy. Thanks so much for your presence here, dear Kelly. :)

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2018 was a journey through my poetic novel, An Owl on the Moon. 2019 will find me going back to a deep inspiration for me... Wonderland... There's no such thing as time to kill Nor time to thr.. more..

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