careless days drifting

careless days drifting

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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I found hope...

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Careless days drifting softly

over my tongue like apricot honey,

sweet and slow on summer’s edge.

 

How the sun paints your cheeks

with a hint of rose-kissed blushes

and you dance; rhythm and rouge.

 

Rain can’t wash off your radiance;

no lipstick smeared, chalked cheeks,

just a scent of apple-orchard bouquets.

 

And me, dabbled in the shallow shade

where sometimes I’ll stop breathing

in wondered dreams wrapped in warm skin.

 

How the world melts away in a smile,

warmish-whispers dancing on wind;

I found hope, and hope has your eyes.


© 2019 An owl on the moon


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awww, this is just so wonderful and ever so lovely, such a wonderful creative piece, muchly enjoyed

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


never expected such a superb turn in Your fourth verse, and then comes Your last verse to settle every emotion of Yours deep and movingly into our hearts, You took us in/with and through Your dream, from sensuality into the deeper parts of love, fabulous read for me, the last two verses takes this into another sublime level.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


An owl on the moon

3 Weeks Ago

I am so grateful for your presence, for your comments. Thank you so much for stopping here, dear Lig.. read more
This is a very descriptive, detailed write. I really like this, i even found somewhat passionate. i found it very creative, wonderful write

Posted 1 Month Ago


Oh WOW!!! This is just so melodic and flows so gentle,
There is a sweet bliss in your words.. Very Beautiful write.
You write very good.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

we catch visuals...we catch the scent of romance...we melt along with the words you present of love and hope...and the 4th stanza is especially strong with its image of stopping the breath in wondered dreams...wow on that one...wish i had written that stanza.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much jacob. May you find that place of joy and breathless wonder in every day my dear f.. read more
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Rye
So very sweet, This write is delicately written.
So beautiful. I enjoyed this write a lot!
Keep writing always.

Posted 2 Months Ago


This has everything I love about romantic writing! And I don't even like romantic writing! Usually it's too general & seeming to follow a prescribed sound/structure. I love how specific you are, using imagery that awakens the reader's senses on all levels. This is what's missing in so many other romantic pieces . . . your words actually INFUSE me with sensations . . . I can FEEL what you're saying. I never realized how often this does NOT happen for me, when reading love poems. This is amazingly seductive, even tho it's not got a bit of sensuous nuance, but just the sensory impact is so stimulating, it makes me want to be all over this guy, this narrator who is melting me with adoration pure & sweet (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

Awww, thank you, dear Margie! I am so glad you could find the joy flowing through the words and sens.. read more
That last verse has to be my favorite! I love the tone and beautiful imagery in this piece. It's certainly something when we find hope in someone else's eyes and theirs is the reason making us look forward to our days...
Enchanting write, Craig. Hope you're well. x

Posted 2 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

Ah, dear Dr. Yumna, your presence is always like a medicine... a good one... not the yucky kind kind.. read more
Your carefree days are dulcet and slow on summer's edge with delicious flavors of apricots, apple orchard bouquets. Filling us with warm whispers of dreams and hopes, Craig.
Querido,sua linda poesia sempre me da muita alegria. Espero que tudo está ótimo com você meu lindo amigo. Uma grande abraço.

Posted 3 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

How deeply I appreciate your comments, Mrudula! Amiga precioso e maravilhoso, que alegria é para mi.. read more
Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

It's always a great pleasure to read your wonderful writings, dear Craig. Tudo de bom para você Qu.. read more
Owl,
A very imaginative poem! This could be a real moment . . . or a beautiful daydream.
T

Posted 3 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much! It came from a daydream... but I always wish for such a moment... :)

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2018 was a journey through my poetic novel, An Owl on the Moon. 2019 will find me going back to a deep inspiration for me... Wonderland... There's no such thing as time to kill Nor time to thr.. more..

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