TIME...

TIME...

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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A life in technicolor...

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Time screams
New life born
Pink blush
The color of spring

Time laughs

Two grow into one

Dressed in white

The shade of summer

Time smiles

Shared existence

Soft sultry tones

The flush of autumn

Time remembers

Reflecting life

Gray grace

The tint of winter

Time now weeps

As fingers let go

All the colors

Fade to sacred black..

 

 

© 2009 An owl on the moon


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Oh, my I'm the first to review.. I am momentarily stunned.. I actually envisioned my lived life in these 5 stanzas.
"Time now weeps
As fingers let go
All the colors
Fade to sacred black"
(My world this past year)

This is brillieant. Wow, the imagary is incredible. I'm off to share this with a few I know will be as impressed as myself. Just spectacular..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is so well written. Although it doesn't rhyme, I'm glad it doesn't for it makes more of story or more real and after all "time" is like a story that we create. It's so simple but so beautiful. I like the stanza where you explain fall, that one was my favorite.

Posted 14 Years Ago


With my eyes closed...I can feel this ...!
Yes I have learned in my short life that time has many voices..whispers, colors, shapes, images, etc. No one can stop the time.
It is a reflection in what has happen before will happen again and again..and it wont stop.. love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the 'gray grace' of winter - amazing description, beautiful image.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Awesome poem of life through the seasons. Excellent work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


what an extraordinary beautiful poem bringing us from beginning to end. The flash of colors through the season of years tells a remarkable story...brilliant...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this one for so many reasons. I like how you have presented this piece. The way you have the font growing and then fading away again. It brings movement to the text and energy to your words. Then there is the context itself. Another exceptional job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


An interesting passage of the world through time.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful piece. I'm not very old yet, but I envision those final times as bleak ... I hope they won't be, though.

I love your contrast in the beginning to the end. It's really well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow I need to check on yovr work more often it gets better every poem I swear. The concept of time is almost a tochy topic for me... It keeps going... almost shocking yet yov can never tell its moving... makes me think Great poem exspressed everything I thovght abovt!

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is no end to your brilliance! I absolutely loved how each season represented a phase in life, how the colors start out vibrantly and fade with time. The reader can see life play out before their eyes! I'd quote my favorite lines, but I really loved all of it. There's a reason you're one of the top writers here... every piece is so imaginative! Amazing work as usual, I'd expect nothing less :]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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