IMMERSED

IMMERSED

A Poem by An owl on the moon
"

I want to immerse myself in you...

"

 

I want to immerse

myself in you
mesh together
hand-to-hand
heart-with-heart.

Memorize you

every dream

every freckle

every curve

every joy.

Absorbed.

Bathed.

Covered with us.

Saturated and

melting together

where each raindrop

is a recollection

of your smile

as the drops slither

slide down

slip over glass

gliding

like fingers

over your skin.

In the wind

I hear the echoes

of your voice

and feel your

soft caress.

So I gaze

glare

survey

stare

into your eyes

into your thoughts

into your mystery.

As snowflakes now
float and fall like
ashen butterflies

and blanket earth
may we blend

into one

becoming

completely

IMMERSED…

 

© 2010 An owl on the moon


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You are brilliant, dear poet. The notion of being completely 'immersed' into the one who holds our heart is elevating and oh, so passionate.

'Memorize you/every dream/every freckle/every curve/...'

I'm smiling and thinking, for truly fortunate is the gal who wins your heart. So very exceptional, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Very impressive. The detail in your words portray a vivid vision into the readers mind. This is an amazing piece of work. Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


amazingly well written, i love it! its soooo cute!

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great sensual write..That is demurely written to draw one in and hold their attention..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sunflower

Posted 10 Years Ago


This brought a smile to my face :]
Very exquisite writing sir ^.^
Two thumbs up! :D


Posted 10 Years Ago


a grate poem well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the ending: As snowflakes now
float and fall like
ashen butterflies
and blanket earth
may we blend
into one
becoming
completely
IMMERSED…


That pulls the whole poem together nicely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great Romantic poem! I love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


And that is the way love should be... a total submission of love.. and total surrender..
the words the comes to mind .. I do.. forever. and ever..
Love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


So greatly worded, you speak of love very magically. Describing the way to see perfection even in every flaw.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well done friend. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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