The Stars are Hidden

On my night’s walk through the snow ‘neath clouded skies…

 

The Stars are hidden

Past veiled, lace-woven clouds

Misted, muted light

On gardens of white ice…

Yet I see them glowing

In my mind’s eye

As in dreams

That ride on wings of doves…

Now step-stepping onward

The only sound my footsteps

Still.. still.. still.. they sing…

And all nature sleeps

In silent slow slumbers

As I waltz drifting

On snowy stone…

I hold a tenderness inside

In mystery of my muse

Yet am fierce as fire

Unyielding my dreams

Clinging like sea to shore

Unrelenting my will…

The stars are hidden

Yet I see them still…

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe yes you put so eloquently into words how just because it can't been seen doesn't mean it don't exist... like love and faith... dreams too can never been seen fully just in bits as you build toward making it come true.
Top notch writing again sir.

[We are young.]

So amazingly brillant, reminded me of as summer softly slubbers soon but it a winter version this gave me such a great picture in my head, it seemed to realx be as I read it. The ryhthme was fantastic too. All over perfect!

[Sean Allen]

The peaceful, sleeping, beauty of nature mixed with the relaxed power of language have allowed you to create this statement of faith.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a beautiful scenery you have painted here in almost delicate verse, very moody and enchantingly so.

[Georgia Gypsy]

Absolutely wonderful! I love the feelings this evokes, a very magical walk indeed!! thank you for sharing!!!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The imagery in this piece is so striking. I absolutely loved it.
The flow is so soothing and effortless, flowing like a river..
Absolutely flawless!

[Jenny Nelson]

Very peaceful, hopeful, and beautiful. A pleasure to read.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

What a beautiful gentke poem my dear frind , you capture the moment , the nature in such untimate way ... I loved it !
Yossi

[fhamie]

this is a great write! feel the cold... yet warmth of this write..:D

[Matt]

beautiful description.

[Helen Woodward]

Beautiful as always Craig and written with a tender pen. Such wonderful phrasing my dear friend.
The night sky gives poets so much to muse on doesn't it? You have painted a vivid canvas with your word choice...
Just sublime Hon xxx

Helen~