Apricots and Summer

Apricots and Summer

A Poem by An owl on the moon

She is... and more... so much more...




















































She is apricots and summer

Delicious golden interludes

The fragrance of fresh coffee

Cuddles and hugs by autumn bonfires

Dawn dancing with rose petal lips

Taste of dark chocolate nibbles

Glinting winter snowfall grins

Stained glass window glimmers

Valentine lace and paper hearts

Spring robins and song sparrows

Shells collected at the seashore

Holidays and smooth red wine

She is…


© 2010 An owl on the moon

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Wow this is beautiful. The way you wrote this, it creates such lovely imagery! A stunning piece of writing. Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

awww this was so wonderfuly sweet, you write amazingly!

Posted 13 Years Ago

I absolutely love the beautiful imagry of this. You're talent to paint us a lovely picture, really putting us into the vividness of your words is wonderful!
Great piece Craig!


Posted 13 Years Ago

great imagination... ur choice of words is awesome...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Your ability to use the right adjectives always shames me to no end I think I can write than I read yours and think i am comparing my work to van gough

Posted 13 Years Ago

nice picture, great poem. I loved how you described her, I could almost smell the coffee on her, and imagine she tates like rose petals and chocolate and red wine. great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

a very smooth and passionate piece ..the imagery was done well in this ..overall i thought you did an amazing job on this... keep up the great writes!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is beautiful, to say the least. I can almost feel your passion through these images. Wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago

What a beautiful and passionate piece. You have mixed the essence of her in the imagery that you have painted. I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is a very sensual, unique description. I like the "She is..." at the end, as though the appeal of this characters lists on infinitely.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 14, 2010
Last Updated on April 10, 2010


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