Your song...

Your life is like the most beautiful song I've ever heard...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The song I hear is soft and slow

And then like amber light it grows

 

Reflections of your voiced refrain

Repeating now of crimson stains

 

Forever in silvery symphony

With slides and slurs and harmony

 

And your song a deep rhythm now

Darkly brooding chants that bow

 

So the cadence brings the end

And the interlude in time begins

 

Your life is the most beautiful song

I cling to your music all day long

 

Let me listen to it all my days

And let your song lead my ways...

 

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

This was so genuine, and so beautiful-- absolutely wonderful piece. I love the trailed off ending, making it seem as if it continues on forever. Excellent write.

-Coral-

[Omar Fendri]

Candidly I don't find perfect words to comment here... It's just sooo emotional, authentic, pure, honest and heartfelt! you see, I couldn't pick adjectives.
The description was so harmoniously genuine.
Nothing to add but PERFECT :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

i like the way you described that inspiration , that made her more interesting and beautiful...that made this poem like a life like song....GREAT POEM!

[Kesha]

The flow here is amazing, I really enjoy reading your poems! Another wonderful poem!

[Monday Parker]

I thought this rather dark-almost haunted...Very well written, but where it took me was a full different direction than the rest of your comments...

[Lovely Lady]

Like a beautiful mystery solved.... I'd like to hear your song!
Well done.

[Jenny Nelson]

I like this. It's so pleasant and upbeat in its content and rhyme pattern. Uplifting and hopeful.

[Raja]

Wonderful! Your poem has a soft rhythm that tunes readers with their kind of notion about how to love the creative things on earth. It is visible here. I liked it a lot.

Thanks.

Raja

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Sounds like a slow, awesome song. Really good job.

[Sean M. Addams]

very soothing write ..imagery was beautifully done in this .. overall a very superb piece :) great job!!