On Carousel's Sweet Ride

On Carousel's Sweet Ride

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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On a wish and a prayer...

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Swirling enchanted alabaster skies

In trembling voice a June berry sighs

In the fragrance of a black velvet rose

With wonders how the seasons grow

Hovering on the carousel’s sweet ride

My horse bounding meadows in stride

Painted gold yarrow’s drifting dance

Now summer’s gone in happenstance

Nights of the soft sensual lilac mist

In dreamish warm colors gently kissed

I’m lifted now on those golden wings

Soaring on childhood’s whispered swing

Starlight, star bright, every star align tonight

When they ignite, bring every dream in sight...

© 2010 An owl on the moon


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Gorgeous! This is a most uplifting and dreamy read. I dearly lovedxeach and every line... I cant come up with enough adjectives to sing your praises on this one. I am speechless. Such a spellbinding write, id love to escape to your fantasy world and live there an eternity. "When they ignite, bring every dream in sight." I hope so. This is just beautiful.... :')

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a refreshing, delightful resonance this brings to heart and mind. Your words are dripping with hope,childhood memories and the wonderful carousel.
Whispers a longing of peace and contentment

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love the imagry and describition. the wrod choice and the flow of the poem was famtastic. i loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Amazing! you have this unerring ability to capture ones imagination...

Posted 10 Years Ago


My horse bounding meadows in stride
Painted gold yarrow’s drifting dance-------------------------Oh I do love those two lines. I can close my eyes and imagine riding the carousel horse across those meadows... with the gold yarrow. I always did love carousels.....and this poem makes me see that wild yarrow in my backyard in a different light... thank you for such a beautiful poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Simply charming!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I absolutely love the first line. The images you bring through your words really sets the theme/tone of this. As another comment said, this is simply enchanting. Wonderful write. I'm definitely glad a decided to stop by.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a great morning to start the day off. I'll shall hit print to read at work, need something to remind me that work isn't life. Ugh, I hate my job. Thanks!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The opening line is absolutely beautiful...the whole thing is just enchanting. Takes you deep into an entranced dream world...and such vivid imagery. Love this piece :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a slow walk through a beautiful meadow, on a gorgeous spring day with the most beautiful girl I have ever seen....who actually wants me. Perfect....I am impressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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2018 was a journey through my poetic novel, An Owl on the Moon. 2019 found me goinging back to a deep inspiration for me... Wonderland...2020 will whisper itself over the seasons... Come walk the worl.. more..

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