The sun is jealous

Based on a true story... or so says I...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ì Hush golden sun is jealous of your smile     

Burns muted hot in your warmth for awhile…

 

Ì And wild ocean steals color from your eyes

In your stirring shadows, the blue waves rise…

 

Ì How the whistling wind whispers your name

Haunts deeping forests, dances blossoming plains…

 

Ì Each step you take caressingly skates the earth

Startling stones of fire lust quiver in untamed mirth…

 

Ì Thunderous chants in emotions of earth and isles

Hushed golden sun is so jealous of your smile…

 

Reviews

[?]

well Craig you have done it again. You must be a romantic.
This is so romantic and just flows so easily.
Makes me imagine a man telling this to his woman as she lays there with her eyes closed. gosh
wow great poem
Thanks for sharing with me
Look forward to the next

[OR]

Original, brilliant and with nice flow
What more to say ?
Peace

[the_stoic]

words aren't enough to praise your sparkling thoughts and the writes that follow . all i can say is you always inspire me !!

[MarcoftheBeast]

inspiring and intelligently written.. great great work sir.

[Geralyn Miller]

You better watch it, strange women are going to start stalking you and falling in swooning sighs at your feet.
You are truly a Romantic, and you do it so well.

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful, such beauty in your words. It makes me think of a fairytale or myth perhaps. Its so full of romance, I'll say it again, so very beautiful!!!

[Dani]

absolutely brilliant. I find it difficult to compare nature to people (rather than the other way around, which is way easier for me), but oh my, you make it look so incredibly easy. wonderful write :)

[Star Wolf]

A very powerful love, very romantic. Awesome write, it sounds rather like a legend or myth.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very captivating work..Got my attention and held onto my ADD self.Ha!..It speaks to everyone who has loved or is still in love...Very romantic..I am glad that I chose this one today to read for I needed a lift..May the wind always be at your back helping you forward to your goals and may you enjoy each step of the way..Sunflower

[Lilly]

Suc an enchanting poem and person is created/described here in your words. Really beautiful work and descriptions.