The sun is jealous

Based on a true story... or so says I...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ì Hush golden sun is jealous of your smile     

Burns muted hot in your warmth for awhile…

 

Ì And wild ocean steals color from your eyes

In your stirring shadows, the blue waves rise…

 

Ì How the whistling wind whispers your name

Haunts deeping forests, dances blossoming plains…

 

Ì Each step you take caressingly skates the earth

Startling stones of fire lust quiver in untamed mirth…

 

Ì Thunderous chants in emotions of earth and isles

Hushed golden sun is so jealous of your smile…

 

Reviews

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well Craig you have done it again. You must be a romantic.
This is so romantic and just flows so easily.
Makes me imagine a man telling this to his woman as she lays there with her eyes closed. gosh
wow great poem
Thanks for sharing with me
Look forward to the next

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful!! Words cannot exspress the feelings of this poem! let me breathless!

[shythatway]

Or so says you.. =) It's the same Craig, poetry as beautiful as I remember.

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the first/last line..just make this a really touching beautiful piece..

[E. A. Fielder]

"Hush golden sun is jealous of your smile" that reminds me of the song "Fields of Gold." Can I steal your brain whenever I'm having writer's block? You always come out with a new poem and they are always great! Have you ever thought of being a lyricist?

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well I must say this show complete adoration for someone, the verses show great tenderness when comparing this woman to nature and earth. Wonderful work.

[Kerry O'Connor]

This is the whole package, Craig. A visual, imaginative and emotive display.