I drowned within a chocolate sea...

I drowned within a chocolate sea...

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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But what a way to go... :)

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I drowned within a chocolate sea

and felt the darkness swallow me

feared the worst; thought all was lost

over my mind such memories cross’d

saw sun’s reflection on the waves

tasty sweetness on my lips I craved

then I drank it down to the lastest drop

such sweet revenge; I couldn’t stop

travelled to a mall, a shop, a store

knew I had to have some more

and when my revelry was done

I smiled, though I weighed ‘alf a ton

now happy I am all my days, you see

for I drowned within a chocolate sea…



 

© 2011 An owl on the moon


Author's Note

An owl on the moon
Grab your swimsuit… you won’t need a towel… Hope you're smiling...

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I am not a fan of chocolate but this quirky fun piece has given me the endorphins I came looking for ! It feels warm and bright here.. all that shiny happiness from all these giddy souls!Brilliant!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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10 Years Ago

Now I'm needing to know what you wish more than chocolate... must keep you smiling too! You deserve .. read more
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Decadent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was cute =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Im am certainly smiling. Hope you saved some for me and the rest of the Chocoholics here at Le' Cafe'. This poem flows like a chocolate waterfall.
A very tasty write...goin' to hang with the Oompa Loompas now...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this! What a perfectly sweet write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


haha I love this idea yummy! :-) Great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, what a chocolate fix that is! :) Most excellent, yummy, and made me smile for sure :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohh Myyyy,,,,
i needa chocolate right now!! can taste it already in my tongue..

Great!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Craig :)
Life is like a box of chocolates ... you never know what hit the ...
sweet and tasty poem...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice imagination! I would like to drown within a chocolate sea.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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