Entropy

Undetermined, unfathomable, limitless

Unmindful, unsuccessful, careless

How strange…random words…

So meaningless yet so meaningful!

Unadulterated freedom…

Perhaps too lenient a right…

The use of words!

How strange…random thoughts…

So weak, yet so powerful!

Pure luxury of a worriless mind!

Perhaps too ambiguous … to the outsider…

The use of thoughts…

Unending joy…  crude poetry?

Poetry it is, is it not?

How strange…random judgement…

So important…yet so useless…

Complete dominance of a beautiful mind

Perhaps too rebellious… the human heart…

Invincible power…

Unauthorised dominance

Inexistent shyness…

Unbound happiness…random feelings…

Yet it is so beautiful…is…unaccountable sadness!

Author's Note

Entropy is a scientific term for randomness...it must always increase!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"rebellious… the human heart…

Invincible power…

Unauthorised dominance

Inexistent shyness…

Unbound happiness…random feelings…"

[magenta24uk]

what a wonderful balance you have here and the words are amazing. Excellent stuff.

[Ahena MK]

Perhaps too rebellious… the human heart…
Invincible power…
Unauthorised dominance
Inexistent shyness…

loved the entropy !!

[Frieda P]

Lot's of random contradictions in this sweet write, I love it, we use words to raise someone spirits or cut them to the bone, they wield a powerful impact, our sword can also draw blood in poetry, you bled beautifully, albeit randomly on this page! Going in my favorites toot sweet...

[Blue]

Ahh, this is too profound for my feeble mind but I can say that this poem reflects your wisdom! A delightful read!

[Pryde Foltz]

Perhaps too ambiguous … to the outsider…
The use of thoughts…
Unending joy… crude poetry?
Poetry it is, is it not?
How strange…random judgement…
So important…yet so useless…
Complete dominance of a beautiful mind

It is how you look at it. A very intelligent write.

[Sami Khalil]

"How strange…random thoughts…

So weak, yet so powerful!

Pure luxury of a worriless mind!

Perhaps too ambiguous … to the outsider…"

You have tackled this powerful phenomenon marvelously. Thank you for sharing the science...:).........................

The use of thoughts…

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

As always...thank you Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Khushi]

Its a very deep deep poem. I'm 14 so maybe I dont get it properly but still I love it! Great work!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Don't grow up very fast khushi...thank you for the review!