Flip-flop Flip-flop

Flip-flop Flip-flop

A Poem by Chandradhish Ghosh

Endless chatters, silent groans

Hand in hand

Sweat-stained clothes

Free fall of sand

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Endless walks, free flowing hair

Street side food

An unwavering stare

Swings of a mood

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Unfulfilled dreams, distant lands

Vermillion’d forehead

Post-rock bands

Alcohol and weed

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Screaming silence, half-read book

Intoxicating trance

A long hard look

Murder of plans

Flip-flop Flip-flop

 

Bare-foot on sand, silent tears

Comfortable pillows

Defeated fears

Darkened billows

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Dimmed out lights, thundering rain

Forgotten memories

Boisterous lane

Unending stories

Flip-flop flip-flop

© 2014 Chandradhish Ghosh


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I enjoyed your writing and your use of description

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Bare-foot on sand, silent tears

Comfortable pillows

Defeated fears

Darkened billows

Flip-flop flip-flop"

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dee
Like this story/poem a lot Chandradhish, it is clever, and laid out well which makes for great reading..
I think 'flip flop flip flop' will dance in my head for a while, lol..love it...Bravo my friend...Dee


Posted 6 Years Ago


Chandradhish Ghosh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dee...I am sure you will like the other poems too! When you have the time and mood.. read more
Each stanza just got better, you tell a story within your poetry, love my flip flops and the beach, this brought back some old zesty memories. Love 'Vermillion’d forehead' and that entire verse.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chandradhish Ghosh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Freida...you know vermillion'd forehead is a reference to a traditional bengalee c.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

No I didn't, thought you were referring to sunburn...will do that. Thanks for the info. :)
this is amazing and so cleverly written

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chandradhish Ghosh

6 Years Ago

Thank you Laurie...I welcome you to read the other works!
╰☆╮I really like the repetition you used here. Great job! ^-^╰☆╮

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chandradhish Ghosh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Brittany...you look very pretty in the picture! :)
"Dimmed out lights, thundering rain
Forgotten memories
Boisterous lane
Unending stories
Flip-flop flip-flop"
well written hey, i loved this one a lot, it really gets you into the poem and i loved the way you repeated the last line too :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Dimmed out lights, thundering rain
Forgotten memories
Boisterous lane
Unending stories
Flip-flop flip-flop

Great marriage between form and sentiment.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chandradhish Ghosh

6 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde!
I like the poem a lot and the way you laid out the form too. As if you have a heading and then some definitions...Excellent...:)..

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Chandradhish Ghosh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..............

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